All Comments on 'A Savage Shore Vignette'

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RedRhythmicSerpentRedRhythmicSerpentabout 4 years ago
Outstanding!

What a pleasant surprise this morning. Enjoyed with my coffee. Many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for this. Nice little follow up to a great story with great characters. Will there be more Vignettes?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Great story, and I love Major Payne!

chip812chip812about 4 years ago
Any time...

Any time, place, or perspective you want to share any Savage Shore stories, please do so. Your story telling is top-notch and this is one of my favorites.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 4 years ago

So Refreshing!

To see someone actually believe a female child instead of dismissing her concerns. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I'm currently re-reading Tefler's three square meals series, but this new story reminded me how much I enjoyed your savage shore series and I think they are due for another reading too. Thank you for your writing.

ArcTalyxArcTalyxabout 4 years ago

Short, sweet and very enjoyable. I also really enjoy finding out where authors get their inspiration from.

Wickedelf6000Wickedelf6000about 4 years ago
Glad you're back!

As you can see we missed your writing! That was a fun short story and now I'm thinking... Let's reread all the stories again!

Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I hope all is well for you and yours during these difficult times, and thank you for a reminder why I love your stories.

AmbivalenceAmbivalencealmost 4 years ago

Nice short story...

So, you thinking about someone using those alien's biotech to make humans and jZav'Etch biologically compatible...?

Would be interesting to have Carter and company with blood children...

Or to see him and his family get in some form of fight with another clan...

RipperFishRipperFishalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Human/jZav`Etch offspring

Ambivalence, I get this question fairly often and have tried to answer it as clearly as I know how. Please use the following link to get to the Savage Shore forum thread where I have just typed up an explanation.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=91908346&posted=1#post91908346

Thanks for your interest and thanks a lot for leaving a comment!

RF

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I just finished reading upon a savage shore and thoroughly enjoyed it. Saw this new one and had to read. Very fun stories, good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

Have read all your stories. Glad to see a return to savage shore. You have been missed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Missed reading your stories

Glad to see you back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
please do more

I can not wait to see if you finish this. I loved “Upon A Savage Shore” I was both disappointed and satisfied when I read it. I’m glad to have read this tie in and if you continue I’ll be sure to read every one

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thankyou

Thankyou thankyou thankyou

I love the idea of a sequel.

It would totally work with stories from the

Children.

LwcbyLwcbyover 3 years ago

I love your stories I wish I could afford to buy them on Amazon my ex took everything and I'm broke homeless and living in a van your stories make my nightmare happy thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Can't believe I've only just found this snippet. Hope to see more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If he is in there he ain’t happy…..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another excellent story. Really enjoyed this one.

RamazaRamazaabout 2 years ago

Way too short, there is so much more to Liam Carter and his family, please honor them with the real story that they deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story. Had me thinking about the children. Then you did this short, which is great by the way. Maybe Liam could do that mountain trip, find or eat something that makes him biologically compatible with his wife's. Just a thought.

TarlosoTarlosoabout 2 years ago

I really wish you could write more excellent stories...here or anywhere.. patreon????

UncertainTUncertainTalmost 2 years ago

A great little self-contained vignette.

Richard1940Richard1940almost 2 years ago

Nice to see that the SarJant Household have bonded so well. I know I'm being greedy but and chance of more of the family story

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Well, guess I'll have to read more of your stories because I liked this one. Thanks

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 1 year ago

Ohhh how 8 have missed the sarge and his wifes.

I fervently hope that they come back in a longer

sequel. Thanks for this.

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlotabout 1 year ago

Perfect. An almost sitcom episode about the family 10 years later.

Another "Well Done" from an old retired military aviator.

thrill_ogrethrill_ogre11 months ago

Lmao Major Payne!! I forgot how good that scene was!! Lol

BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca6 months ago

Oh sweet Jesus, that was absolutely precious, Sally is truly a chip off the old block.

BigDog167BigDog1676 months ago

Please, please, please start writing again.

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