by LordRamsay
newspapers what is described as combat fatigue the father simply kills them all assholes and sluts. Cant wait for your next chapter that gives nonconsent to the father from the assholes and sluts as he simply blows each one of them apart. Yeah we need more assholes that write stories that disrespect our service people and their families, we need it like the need HIV..........
If you don't like this kind of stories, don't read it!
It is rather well written and I find it exciting (even if the introduction is a bit long).
Keep going, man!
like BostonFictionWriter. If it is you Freddie, I congratulate you on another plunk in the toilet.
Nice blow by blow account of turning an innocent girl into a dirty little slut. I'd like to see her mom get into the act.
So good to see the continuation of this story and i hope that you continue to write more and more. Really fucking brilliant
WOW....I so enjoyed the journey so far.....look forward to the next few chapters....
Thank you for all so far
Flegelo
MORONS WHEN CONFRONTED WITH THE GENERAL. IF YOU'RE GOING TO CHANGE THEIR INTELLIGENCE..MAKE THEM SMART ENOUGH TO NOT HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH YOU.
Nice buildup- nice seduction. I like stories with a seduction over those which spend about 3 sentences dumping straight into sex.
And very credible- I've seen the brain turn off as lust gets to the person many times. If anything, it turns against them once they want to fuck, it starts finding reasons and rationalizing.
I love it when people bring morality into their comments. If they are all for morality what are they doing reading about a school girl being "taught" in the non consent section? silly billys. i read this story in a public car park and couldn't help but touch myself. it was a great story, very descriptive....loved it... wonder if u can still get away with being a school girl at 22?
...thought and effort put into this. But I have to say that it doesn't feel very plausible to me.
The girl was described aa 'bright' and I dobt that based on the later development. I'd rather call er the opposite for falling so fast for his 'genius'.
But that may be just me who wishes for a more compelling 'education'...
By far one of the best corrupting innocence stories I have ever read. It is really, really hot in every way. And really tells the story of how it can be done when there is no apparent leverage.