All Comments on 'A Second Life'

It's a male fantasy of what he thinks (or wishes?) lesbians were like.

A nice little story, short and sweet. I liked your description of 'Doug being so... Doug...'--- I'm sure that all of your readers will have known exactly what you meant and it's a perfect illustration of less is more.

Loved the anticipation of delicious sex between these two women. But how could you abbreviate the two sex acts down to one short paragraph each? I love lots and lots of detail - what was it like to kiss her? Was she soft and sweet, or more forceful, or passionate? How did she react when her nipples were played with, or sucked? Tastes? Smells? What did her clitoris look like? Did she find it to be almost too sensitive to touch? Or did she want it enthusiastically sucked? I want it all. Take at least a whole page just for sex. Please!

moral of the story fuck lesbians, they are the unwanted

A guy's clueless take on sapphic desire.

So only "women" can write these stories?

Good luck defining that?