by trixiej
I just discovered you. Verrry nice! Really enjoyed this story. Nicely done.
I rarely award 100 points, but this story deserves every one: believable characters, realistic dialogue, hot sex and a credible plot. Part of me was hoping Trix would get it on with the old man, mainly so the story wouldn't end, but it's a stronger entry for ending it that way. Will definitely be checking out more of your contributions.
Some very realistic elements of this story. The techniques are right on. many are curious about this type of thing
This story was very well written with no mistakes (that I saw, anyway). Add your kinky to your intelligence and you might just be the girl of my dreams! Wait...does your father own a liquor store? All jokes aside, nicely done!
Your story was great. TrixieJ does it again! You know how much you turn me on.
Love,
Skeet