by Magicwrtr
Great second part , could be a lil longer but is going great so far , i crave for more ^^
Great writing; it's wonderful to see a story from a female perspective, and even more interesting to have a genie story from the genie's perspective. I'll be reading everything you have.
I love this premise and think the concept is great. Unfortunately, I’m struggling to disappear into the story, because the POV of the genie reads far too much like the male gaze/male vocabulary and not a virginal magical being.