All Comments on 'A Sex Genie's Autobiography Ch. 02'

by Magicwrtr

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Plz continue yr work ^^

Great second part , could be a lil longer but is going great so far , i crave for more ^^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great writing; it's wonderful to see a story from a female perspective, and even more interesting to have a genie story from the genie's perspective. I'll be reading everything you have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great concept but not written from the perspective of the character

I love this premise and think the concept is great. Unfortunately, I’m struggling to disappear into the story, because the POV of the genie reads far too much like the male gaze/male vocabulary and not a virginal magical being.

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