All Comments on 'A Sexy Neighborhood Surprise'

by RobAnthony53

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good but details could improve

A human proofreader would help trap typos like Dense for Denise. Also, page 89 and page 90 would be back to back on the same sheet of paper. You mean 88 & 89 or 90 & 91.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
ASNS

Good, but...I think you should have come back to the neighbor to finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story would be good for a sequel, preferably one involving Denise as well.

RobAnthony53RobAnthony53over 2 years agoAuthor

Wow, I have a hard-on that won’t quit right now. I see you love big tits and so do I, especially on older women. I prefer a nicely trimmed pussy, no shaving for me. Thanks for the vivid storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Did the author comment positively on their own story below? That's some Scott Adams level tackiness. I wanted to leave a comment about the story and its possibilities for the future but this behavior feels gross.

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