All Comments on 'A Shocking Surprise'

It would have been something to the effect that it was a great story and how I loved it.

Then she says "Have you ever rimmed a girl David?"

It then went totally sick.

What an awful end to a nice story.

I don't blame them in the least , both got what they wanted and her husband still gets what he wants .

There's a video clip of a guy cybering with a young lady.

She pulls up her shirt to show her bra-covered tits. He pulls down his pants to show his boxer-covered wood.

Just then, his mom calls him down to dinner. He pulls up his jeans, shuts off the compiter and runs down the stairs.

He starts eating when his sister walks in a sits opposite him at the table.

They look at each other's T-shirts, and realize ... they were just cybering EACH OTHER! They look at each other with obvious disgust. (My sibling? Ewwww....)

it wasn't the best story I've read... but it was good. personally, I like stories more with sibling love rather than sibling lust... but this is good too. the writing itself is done quite well and the sex is just vivid enough.

it wasn't the best story I've read... but it was good. personally, I like stories more with sibling love rather than sibling lust... but this is good too. the writing itself is done quite well and the sex is just vivid enough.

it seems that when he realized he was at his sisters house he would have turned around and left. if he went to the door as soon as hse slamed it in his face he would have turned and left and not stopped when she opened the door again. keep it out of the twilight zone this was total trash.

That bothered me was the comment that she went all out for this sort of thing. Meaning that she has cheated on her husband with other guys from the site and the brother never seemed to pick up on that and only wondered of her husband fucked her like he was. Yeah maybe he didn't but all the other guys have. What a whore.