All Comments on 'A Short Career in Films'

Hello! Thank you for your story. I found it quite sweet and liked it. It was probably a little too slow, but I got to enjoy the detail and the many small tangents along the way as an understanding of your character, which brought a sense of touching realism to your story. The sex scenes weren’t explicit, in fact quite subdued, which I think made them quite loving. It was different, tender and almost pure. x

This was a very gentle story.

The production problems are all too common

Thank you. A nicely formatted and delivered story. I once did a similar one, with some other models of the agency I was with. The person running the agency said she didn't want to be formerly involved so we were given the choice to be involved (It was very good money) without the Agency taking their normal commission cut.

It was for a Private "collector" LOL who wanted to Produce and Direct his own private porno, starring his girl friend.

Ha. We just treated it like an extended, wild weekend, doing what we were currently and regularly doing with each other anyway. Lots of fun. Cheers.

Great story, well told. 5*

Great story. I hope to see more great stories from you in the future.

Nice! So gently told, finding the love story amidst the sex. A unique summer loving perspective.

Great story. I’d love to know if their video was shown to their children and grandchildren (for educational purposes). After all, sex education ought to start at home.

Well told - keep wrting! Good luck in the contest!