All Comments on 'A Simple Blow Job'

You just kept revising the first few paragraphs slightly by adding additional phrases and repeated them over and over and over....

with giving a simple blowjob, especially if its with daddy. An acceptable short story, thanks.

Super story, well told. I could feel her soft lips sliding down my cock as I read it. There is no better feeling than shooting your load into the throat of a pretty girl as you look into her eyes

Hope you take his daughter more

I'd have loved a surprise ending such as Daddy had a tiny cock...

Your a damn good writer.

Fuck the World!!

I understand!

Ohh, Fuck Yes, I understand, he said, panting for more.

I enjoyed it.

Good but too repetitive with his comments and questions. So much that it takes away from the flow of the story.