All Comments on 'A Single Night'

Essentially,there's not much to this story. It has the foundation for a much better offering.

did they dress before going to eat? Did she start the night with a bra and go commando to eat? Did he wear briefs?

Did they tease the waitress?

Nice for a start, hope there is more, I understand the title is single night, but it has so much potential.

North

Very nicely done - descriptive and detailed. I like your writing style, and I'll be back for more!