All Comments on 'A Sister Sandwich'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow!

I wish I could rate this one but I really don't know what to think about it, all I can say is the brother has issues and that's clearly stating the obvious. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You people are sick.

How can you write this drivel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
assfucker

damn u mother fucker neil say ur fucking soory bitch i wish i could fucking kill u dude so lay off bitch assfucker

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Next Chapter

I hate the way Neil is such a dickhead, I think he should get some of his own medicean. Maybe a Friend is a Dominatrix and Neil vists here and she ties him up and tapes all humilating things that she does to him and gives it to his litle brother and he gives it to his mother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
My Thoughts

I read all of the stories and they were really good. But what I didn't like was the ending. I think you should have made another one to finish it up for good, not just leave them to go home from the mansion. But it was still good and thanks for making them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What happened

I would like to read more plus how do the get home like that ?

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