by Samuelx
Same Old Crap
You identify everyone by country of origin, race, or religion, as if it counts.
No dialog, always written as a narrative
I imagine that if you believe there is a 'racist Canadian society' it's because of thinking like yours where you always label people in terms of race, religion and country of origin. Learn a more interesting writing style, and learn to see past labels before posting your next story.
All of your stories lack depth and are predictable. Really lame.