All Comments on 'A Son Shows his Mother'

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rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
some will like this

I found it awkward. A narrative written from an uncertain point of view, with a feigned reluctance. It was hard to become involved with. for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Soul mates

With mommy never getting married to another and merely dating a few men over the years, one has to wonder if mommy was saving herself for a man who she would feel the bond with. When she finds that magical bond it is with her own loving son. Spreading her thighs and allowing her own loving son to mount her allows her to reach nirvana. For the son he gets his ultimate conquest his own loving mother to thrust his manhood into until her grunts oh mommy into her ear as his orgasm rips through his mind and his cock explodes sending his incestious seed into mummy's unprotected womb. No condoms or boundaries for this loving couple, mommy allows her son to take her ass, mouth, and especially her pussy which is the greatest conquest of all. I am sure the sex will be even hotter as mommys belly grows and her breasts engorge with milk. Each time her son looks at his pregnant mommy he will know he did this to her body and it will cause him to harden and stick it to mommy again and again. This son is a lucky young man as he has had the pleasure of ravaging his mothers body and making mommy a mommy again

PuertorrormPuertorrormover 8 years ago
I cried.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvcJMlIFW9A

While reading this story I put songs like this one and it reminded me of my own love for my mother. 5/5 story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

a second chapter would be nice

Ducky7Ducky7over 8 years ago
Loved it. It was another quality story

of love and lust.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
thanks, QW, you've done it again

This story's another winner. Just like its two protagonists. 18 year old Liam's a winner, because he gets his fine fat penis up his own mother's warm wet vagina any old time he feels like it. That fabulous slit between her legs--the same slit the kid came out of 18 years before--is truly his "home port." Mom's a winner, because she's got her big strong son up inside her again, where she carried him as a tiny baby, safe and protected and loved, for nine months. Now her Liam's the proud possessor of what she secretly calls in her mind "his Mother's Salvation." That big hard penis her boy is toting works such miracles in her vagina that she practically worships it. Mom's also crazy for that heavy loaded sack Liam's got hanging down between his legs. It's filled with her kid's potent young semen, and--holy shit! Liam's fucked a baby up where he was once a baby! Is he angry about it? Fuck no, the new daddy's over the moon. The grinning young motherfucker is proud of his fertile mother, now his pregnant wife. Proud of his powerful thrusting prick. And proud of his heavy baby-making balls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love? or abuse

I liked the beginning of the story. But then those pink handcuffs just ruined the whole thing. Nothing after that had any semblance of a loving romance. I barely skimmed from there on. The guy knew that they were going to get together sexually, but yet he had to bind her in that way? That's not love--it's abuse.

starfury69starfury69over 8 years ago
good progression

This story was very good. It progressed along at a good pace. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Liked the story

I believe it is baited breath, not bated breath.

Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Comment on Don's correction

Actually, it IS bated breath, Don....look it up

mark73107mark73107about 6 years ago

Nice story,but, it doesn't change the fact that he sexualy molested his mother by trapping her and putting her in a place where she could not escape his advances.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Just another Son like father Rape

This woman did not learn anything after being raped by the father of her son and she fell again into another rape by her son now, and being forced by using handcuffs to restrain her. The writer of this story seems to like having a domineering effect on his mother. He like to show that he is in control, but in reality he is too timid to directly pursue his goal without using force. Sometimes just being nice and accommodating with his mother would have resulted to her letting him take her and make beautiful love to her without being too domineering and she would have accepted his advances and it still would have been a beautiful thing in the end and she still would have been his. The reality is, this is some ones imagination gone wild for the wrong reasons or end result could have damaged a real good relationship been a son and his mother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
1 star

it's a rape story...

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago
No... U have 2 be a Son to understand the true love a son ( Like me) has for a mother. I was her favorite.

Look forward for continue chapters...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another 5 stars. One thing doesn't compute. You say she had plenty of partners and plenty of sex but then say she only had 5 lovers in 18 years but none were serious. One or two of them must have lasted a fair while

LechemanLecheman12 months ago

So, she was raped and then her son, handcuffs her and rapes her again and she rejoices - WTF? The trauma associated with her first rape would have been overwhelming and yet she never revealed the rapist - why?

The message this story is indirectly sending is a serious concern made all the worse by the author not providing a proviso in the beginning of warning readers.

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