All Comments on 'A Song For The Sad Girl'

by Bazzza

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The NavigatorThe Navigatorover 11 years ago
Wonderful!

Bazzza, where have you been? We've missed you. I hope this means you will be gracing us with more of your superb stories real soon. As usual, this one is outstanding.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nicely done

There is something about the uncertainty of freshly meeting that just grabs me.

cpetecpeteover 11 years ago
Great line.

If you look up at the notches in the headboard, every one of them is from a satisfied lover who has experienced multiple orgasms in this very bed."

Georgia raised her eyes, "There's no notches in the headboard."

"Shit, isn't there, I must be a lousy lover too."

GREAT set of lines-well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Enjoyable story

What a fun, short, romantic story. I like how you used the young girl to break the ice. Very believable. Look forward to more stories in the future.

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

Lovely story with good characters and some lively dialog, most of it in bed. Just had to give it five stars for the happy ending.

WILLACWILLACover 11 years ago
Great one.. thanks and

welcome back.... please write for us more often.

F_WhateverF_Whateverover 11 years ago
Thank you!

It was a happy reading :)

TheNextGuyTheNextGuyabout 10 years ago

Only seven reviews and less than 10k views so far for this story? Man, these are unbelievable stats for such a great story.

Well, I really liked what I've read and wish to thank you for sharing this story with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story

Great story. Captures the New Zealand sense of humour perfectly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it

I truly enjoyed reading this. Very well written and steamy as all hell!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

xxxhugsxxx

nedslapnedslapalmost 9 years ago

One of the best on

Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
i love people watching too

liked the easy banter between the two and knowing the places you mentioned, gets more points.

write4foodwrite4foodover 8 years ago
Very Nice!

Great little story, just enough detail for its length and it flowed well. The epilogue was a very nice touch with a vignette all of its own.

Thank you for posting!

MoondogAUMoondogAUabout 8 years ago
Nice one.

Thanks, a nice romance with realistic characters. Enjoyed the fun family ending too.

rightbankrightbankalmost 8 years ago
I love a romantic story

that leaves you with a smile

thanks

ukdukeukdukealmost 8 years ago
smiles!

A nice, gentle romance. Well done and thankyou.

rightbankrightbankalmost 8 years ago
anyone (everyone) who likes a sweet romantic love story

should read this one

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Nice story

Really nice story, maybe a little short, but lovely.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

Avidreader3142Avidreader3142over 6 years ago
So funny !

Really enjoyed that, specially coming from my part of the world. Hope it's at least partly true; I'm going to keep on thinking so anyway.....

thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
bloody neat

no place like home

pretty neat to see nz

here

thankyou, and keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pretty Darn Good Story

It’s too bad the band never made it big, but seems like they had a good life. Thanks go to the author for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely story . .

Well written and nicely paced, plus you stuck the landing at the end.

Tyke58Tyke58about 5 years ago
My kind of story

This really is my kind of story, I love a good romantic tale.

Georgia and Jacob are well crafted, real people. The story is spot on for tempo and believeability. And, as someone else pointed out, you really nailed the landing.

10 out of out 10 from me, I will check out more of your writing.

Mojo648Mojo648about 4 years ago
Review.

Simply put........ I friggin' love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So sweet

Had a really sad day but this girl lightened my mood, perfect amount of sweetness and humor! Wish I’d find my rockstar and songwriter some day

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Loved it

Great story. Keep more like this coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

beaitiful but still a fairy tail

sadly men like jacob are purely imaginary

most nice guys like jacob either turn into a narcissist wife beater or just remaims as a predator / fuckboy on his journey to conquer numerous vulnerable georgia living all of them ashamed for falling for him

end of story

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Just read it again. Very well done! 5* Thanks for sharing.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman2 months ago

reread for me and changed from 4 to 5 stars because of the beautiful ending.

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