All Comments on 'A Son's Discoveries'

Looking to next chapter. Great work so far

Mother certainly seems to be handling her loss quite well. I do wish you'd pay more attention to your quotation marks and general punctuation.

I especially appreciated that you didn't have her immediately shave her naturally beautiful hairy pussy...very rare these days where writers so often transform women, even mothers, into porn-star Barbies. This mom even has stretch marks! Wonderful. Pieater

The story felt a little false.It might be it was just rushed a little.I would like to read more of what is going to happen to them now that they out from under the husband/father's thumb.Thanks for the post....Rich

Mom should have a nice thick bush like this one. It's more real.

I enjoyed this submission and look forward to your next chapter. I am anxious to see how you manage to develop this into the Oedipal love affair that seems to be forthcoming. Thanks for a good tale.

Is there more? It is very erotic.

i never had a son, but if i did. i would hope he would want me. thanks so much for a wonderful story. debbie.xxxxx

This is a good, good story and deserves a sequel. Lets have Mom get pregnant. AnHoa Rifleman

pregnant sex with mom, then lactating sex!

That's how plenty of boys feel when they start smooching their mother. Kissing mom on the lips, nibbling her ear, licking her throat, a boy gets so fucking hard he's practically jizzing in his pants. But young Johnny, in this excellent story, knows a much better place for him to jizz and so does his sex-savvy mother. It's a certain hairy hole between his mother's legs, matter of fact it's the same hole he came out of, a wonderful magical hole--his own mother's cunt. Mom smilingly open up her warm wet cunt to her darling baby boy, she invites him to stick his big fat cock up inside and fuck the shit out of her. Like a good son John obliges his mother, giving her the hot incestuous fuck she wants and deserves. He ends up unloading his young balls and shooting his mom a huge twatful of his creamy semen. Mom just loves having her twat flooded by her boy's semen, she has the best cum of her life. Johnny has lots more sperm in his hot young balls, and like the loving son he is, he'll be giving it to his mother for years to come.

Ah yes, the death knell of any story, "To be continued." If the story sucks, then so what. But, if the story is good then we readers feel short changed. I happened to have liked this story and wish that it had been continued. Ah well, there it is.

Love the story. Hate the one and done type author who promises another chapter and never writes again.

Loved it but just another author says to be continued and then zippo!!!!!!!!!! 5 stars