by Rumple Foreskin
I think the title of the comment says it all. Keep up the good work!
I've exceeded my annual quota of sweet sappiness! If found unconscious, please infuse with raw smut. (Nice job, RF!) ;o)
~Imp
You are such a romantic Rump...it was lovely. Good luck with the contest!
Great, Rumple, keep it coming please
John/Namizujs
Budapest
You made my make-up run. That was really lovely and beautiful and sweet and any other romantic descriptive I can come up with.
Wonderfully told. Thanks, Rump.
Lou
xxx
Nice to see that someone isn't bitter this year! What a fabulous story. I enjoyed it immensely!
God, what a beautiful story Rumple Foreskin!!!!
Thank you for sharing that fantastic tale. *sigh* Now if only I could meet my very own Matt ;-)
Merry Christmas Rumple to you and your family. Best of luck with the comp hon. :kiss:
wish you could have gone into a little more detail of the sex, but it was great the way it fit into the story. What I wish more than anything though is you would have described the birth. The labor and delivery part would have been great if included. Very romantic though!
This lacked the obvious traces of emotion that a woman will put into the writing. Males are more matter of fact and to the point, blunt.
It sounds and feels like a man, trying to write as a woman.
You didn't cry when you wrote, this matters. I know, I write as both.
Interesting, well written, but you can do better since happen to know you have the ability.
(I AM a female...Shhhh...) Figure it out yet?
We have emailed. Lol I gave you a 5 because I like you.
A Great Story and well articulated - nice depth and character development - it didn't need rampant graphic sex to spin the touching story so you didn't yield to the temptation to do so - good show - more please!!!
Best Regards -
Very touching and sensual without being overly graphic. It really proves that Christmas is indeed a time for miracles and joyous surprises. Well done!
Not the sexiest story, but a very good story, well told.
Not what I was expecting, from your name!
I'll read some more of yours.
not bad, the only thing that may help is that should have dumped your
husband before starting a new love life. cheating is never good.
A bastard that beats his wife DOES give her up! She was free and clear the day he laid the hand on her in violence. It was never specified if the couple was urban/black which would be the only way beating your 'bitch' would be approved in society, so we must assume they were of indistinguishable color and character. HE LEFT HER with his violence - get it?!
Dumbassed comments should be left in the "boards" were everyone can chime in
Very nice, very good story. Please write more. I specially like the line:
“A boy, around Christmas.” ... “And we’re not even Jewish.”
Nice touch. :)
never-ever hit a child/animal/woman...if he does DTMF(Dan Savage)
and also LOVE petites...any size really but esp modest...