by Samuelx
like the fact that it's a true love story - is it real?
I really enjoyed this story. Why didn't you finish it? I realize it has an obvious conclusion, so why didn't you go there?
Truth be told, I was about to give up on the story (and on Steven) half way through the story when he started banging on all these other girls, but I'm glad I stuck through it b/c his feelings toward Jessica were so tender and so sweet!
The conceited pompous attitude made me despise the main character from the start, that alone made me dislike the story.
Don't pay attention to the negative comment. The fact is, this was very realistic and quite believable. He had typical attitude for a macho male. The fact he was able to understand himself would be the toughest thing to do. Great Job.
I got a little lost in the other girls too, but it made sense in the long run as he finds Jessica again.
Keep up the good work.
Loved your story. Keep up the good work!!!!!! I look forward to reading more of your work.
I’m a straight man. But beautiful Shemales, trannies and cross dressers have always turned me on; not gay men. Your protagonist in this story, on the other hand, has no such fetish’s. Steve’s just a young man who is genuinely attracted to Jessica because she doesn’t flaunt her ample Femininity by attempting to dressing like a tramp. We’ve all been attracted to the tomboy type at one time or other.
I saw ‘A Special Girl’ as a beautiful love story between a boy and a girl, who just happens to have a big something extra.
I’m kinda new to Literotica, but so far I’ve yet to read a piece like this. Transgender erotica, though often hot, is usually about guilty pleasures of a covert nature. You’re a good writer, and This was the first of yours that I’ve read. It won’t be the last SamuelX.