All Comments on 'A Special Photo Shoot'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Nice story, would love to see another chapter. Now on to a pet peeve of mine, in the 40 some years I have been alive, I have never heard a brother and sister refer to each other as bro and sis in casual conversation, so maybe consider that in your future stories.

cacowboy48cacowboy48about 14 years ago
Loved it

Love this new story from you and found it very captivating, I too would love to read another chapter on these two if you feel it's worthy of one. Again very well written as always.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 14 years ago
Agree with last comment

Shame no actual sex (yes call me a pig if you will).

Maybe next chapter, sister has broken up with girlfriend and can only trust Brother to release some sexual tension.

Just has her consider being bi instead of gay.

Please don't see that comment as anything anti lesbian/gay, that is not my intension. Just thinking of a way for this story to fit in this category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

There has got to be more to this story !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
a great teaser, beautifully done

This is one of the best-written stories I've found on Literotica. Like some others here, I'd love to see it continued. They MUST have some real bondage and real fucking during or after it. Many so-called bondage stories are just accounts of what kind of pain was inflicted on the woman, with no psychological plausibility at all. Your stories are sensitive, realistic, and...very arousing!

Janie in Vancouver

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
he is too gentle

should have done it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Off to a good start

I hope you plan to add more installments to make this the beginning of a series. He needs to ultimately get totally intimate with her. I'm already feeling the tension.

DYNO224DYNO224almost 10 years ago
Well written

Nice little story well written pretty short though. Not really a story for men though I think most of us guys like a story where the man get's the girl it's a romance thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More Chapters?

This was an insanely good read, I hope to see more chapters in the future!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Idea for part 2

Like he said he thought that thing have changed but what he did know and she won’t tell him until the next time she comes to visit him she’ll step off the plane in a sundress, a dog collar and high heel sandals after they back to his house and the front door was closed she drops her dress as her dress hits the floor she drops to her knees and calls him master and she not just there for the weekend this time she comes out for a month but this time she brings her girlfriend a long and she copies his sister to help show them that they had it wrong that they belong at his feet and that all women belong at mens feet all they need is the wake-up call so to speak

iwannagetsumiwannagetsumover 4 years ago
part 2

Please do a part 2, this is a great start!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Would be better if she dumped the bitch Terry and hooked up with the brother

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