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Anonymousalmost 7 years agoWhat to do now? Part two of course.
The death of Sylvia was quite a shock in the middle of the story, and it cries out for some sort of resolution.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agowell...
sort of silly, a little rushed & jumpy. Not totally worthless though, not at all.
Relax, think your was through, then re-read what you write!
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