All Comments on 'A State of Grace Pt. 05'

I enjoy everything you write. Waiting for another great chapter. Thanks

so happy Kevin is going to be ok. I am intrigued as to the real relationship between Chris and Hannah. Could they be sibling lovers too?

I never thought you would kill any of them. Looking forward to them being grand parents. Thanks again

Take your time and tell the story the way you want to. Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté

Hannah and Chria are not siblings. Read Hannahs hero for their story

It's always nice to see things put into their respectful place and perpetrators getting their piece of the cake taken away. Kevin got his ass saved by the lovely nurse and her family, Crystal brought her muscle and the feds to clear the mess pronto, Fleur & Elizabeth hot engaged and everything is going to be sorted out just OK. Simple and clean to make the transition to the next stage of their live easier yet gives you enough room to sort the little things while making road for the big ones, like the wedding and the baby. Already looking forward to more of the good stuff.

5* for this one and thanks for giving them the support and love they deserve!

We really are just a quarter mile into this mineshaft!

I really enjoy your writing and great story telling. I realise the time it takes to put these together, but I hope to be reading your stories about Kevin and Grace for some time to come.

very good story. It would be awesome if it wasn't just this town involved in the conspiracy but at a higher level like the federal government in D.C or maybe even an outside of the country involvement conspiracy :P

I don't read stories on here for the sex really. I read them mostly for the story part so I much prefer the longer stories that have some substance to them over the stroke material, but I understand other people do not. I especially enjoy the stories that show real love between the main characters and not just lust and sex. They make it worth reading them. I enjoyed the original series and am enjoying this one as well and hope you have several more chapters to go and I certainly look forward to future stories involving these characters.

Sir you've undoubtedly kept me rivited to the story once again. I can't tell you how much i appreciate the high sense of professional story writing that you project in all of your works. I can't wait for more Kevin and Grace. Thank you!

Please continue with more chapters to you posts. They are well written have plan that one is able to follow and enjoyable to read. You fall into the story and you can't put it down until you finish. Very good, very enjoyable, keep them coming!

Please continue. As your characters said we are family, we want to continue with this family. There are so many places to go with this story! Thank you so very much!!

agreed with the others, keep it going please. looking forward to much more please.

You have me completely hooked on this story. I want to see how this goes.

What the hell was in that safe???

Still the best, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for all the time and long hours making this happen.

A great piece of writing 5*. For me I don't mind the long stories, because I'm more after the story than anything. I like literotica because it's an uncensored story. It's the story where u say that would've been better if they could've had some detail of what they did when they got to bed or in the dark. If I wanted just jerk it porn I'd just watch porn. I'm after the stories like this where it pulls u in and the sex is the added free bonus to the already great story. Good work, and looking forward to the rest of grace and Kevin's story.

So enjoyed this whole story line...hope you keep on...thanks for all of it!!!

Well done! Cynergetic said it best. The story is where the fun is.

Keep writing about Kevin and Grace. I stayed up to 3:30 catching up. Five stars from me. Merry Christmas.

I cannot BELIEVE I read all of Saving Grace AND State of Grace before realizing that Nurse Hannah is from the Hannah and Chris story! I never dreamed as I was reading these why Hannah was so understanding and accepting of K & GI LOVE when these stories interweave themselves together so nicely. You are an awesome writer and I cannot wait for more from these two and their circle of family and friends!

This series is one of the five best on this entire site. Actually it is in the top three, in my humble opinion. Please continue!

The shark

In case my delightful visual aid wasn't clear, I'm saying you jumped the shark pretty hard with all this. I get that it's fictional, but still - it's a bit much, and by a bit I mean a lot.

Oh, please continue this series it's outstanding. I love it!

Waiting on the next chapter or arc. Cannot wait to read it. Please, please give us something soon.

I can’t wait to read more of this series. One of my favorites.

This is without a doubt one of the best story series here or anywhere! I can't wait for the next chapter (and arc!)

One question: have you considered filling in the 12 years of Hanna's family history? I'm fascinated with the possibilities in that story line as well.

Great read. Hope to read more soon

I found State of Grace by accident and went back and in the space of 24 hours devoured all of Kevin and Graces story.

I would like more please

YOU ARE AN OUTSTANDING WRITER!!! These two stories are incredible! Thank you and I hope the next sequil comes out soon.

The quality of this story is amazing, keep it up. Im loving it.

Hi CM,

Reading your Author's Note made me so happy. Really glad your plan to continue to write about Kevin & Grace.

As to the story, all I can say is loving it!!

CM

Please continue this story as soon as you can.

I know you are very busy time wise with your work, but please make the effort for your fans....

It has been over a year since this story finished. When will we see the next story?

Love this story, this series and especially this authors note. Soon as I’m done the series completely for my third read through I will be emailing you about the continuation xD.

I loved the twins' Brit and Beth. Daddy and mommy trained them well. Although having Brit on overwatch was a teeny tiny bit too much. Given the time, I will read Chris’s and Hannah’s stories. With all the action, adventure, and gunplay (God bless the NRA) going on I think I may like moving to Indiana, it would be fun. And oh yes, I would like to see babies, many babies. I'm a sucker for unconventional families and apply ever after ending. I really really hate Kelly.

Very good story.

I am enjoying them.

The only critique I would have is in your "My Saving Grace" story.

Regarding Trent being taxed.

Taser can deploy a pain compliance with what is called a "Drive Stun". However, a taser, when deployed creates a Neuro Muscular Incapacitation ( NMI) essentially, it locks the person muscles up. The idea placement of the probes is in the upper torso and lower extremities or, "Splitting the Hemisphere".

Keep up the great work .... love the stories !!!

This series is so amazing, it's so loving, heartfelt, and it really makes me wish it never would end.

Thank you so much for writing it and sharing this love story. I think there's one more to read and it makes me sad.