All Comments on 'A Stitch in Time Pt. 03'

I absolutely love this story, I hope you add to it soon, it is so sweet and funny.... Keep up the great work

I've read all of your other stories. This one is really incredible. You truly have a gift for writing. Please continue to post here. As often as possible.

An extremely literate story, with a lot of fun. Not tons of sex, but a lot of fun nevertheless. I loved the occasional play on words. Keep up the good work.

You are EVIL! Keep it up!

Keep it coming!!

I'm really enjoying this series.

I saved my comments for the third chapter. Great story so far! Looking forward to more!

I love the story, it is one of those stories where the sex fits right in without overdoing it. Please keep it up, I look forward to the next chapters

This is excellent work. The sex enhances the story without gratuitously overshadowing it. The story itself is well-plotted, compelling, and, in more ways than one, climatic. Well done.

This is excellent work. Easily the best story I've read on literotica. We need more like this ...

Your story was one of those reads that wouldn't let me stop. I kept expecting either the Santa wish to reverse or that he was going to go down a different road and tell someone about it, so it was a good writing of that conflict or tension. Thanks for the entertainment.

This is a fantastic series, sweet, sensual, erotic, funny, caring, poignant, angry. I think you've run the gambit of emotions that you can pull from a reader, but you still go back for more.

Bless you.

glowing comment to this list, your head will swell up and pop, and then you wouldn't be able to write any more, and then the entire Lit community would ensure I died a slow, painful death. Of course this series is superlative. But you knew that already.

Whst's with the amnisia bit?

However, the denoument was delightful. Ordinarilly High School stories do not interest me, but I can make an exception in this case. Suggestion, a little less sex would improve the story.

I'm not sure what it is. Probably the whole gushy mushy kind of dinga_linga_ding_dong idiocy presented as life here :) Sh* it's just to much. Any one recognizing this from their own school? ¨Really ::)) Give me a break, will'ya :) This reminds me of that movie where 'Bruce' lives in that made up town (Pleasentville?) only to find out it all was a lie in the end. I don't even remember the name of that mediocre movie, but, compared to this that movie was pure genius :)

I am kind of shocked right now, going over this story, because this is probably one of the best stories I have read about redemption that I actually think of, since it's in an erotica website. Truly, I am extremely impressed and kind of sad as well that the story ended. I know the story was long, but so worth it that I wished there was at least another chapter focused on Patrick and Cammie. Wow, great characters, and awesome story. You are a simply awesome storyteller. And, I got to learn a lot about baseball as well.

you are an absolutely fantastic writer. Thank you.

Great story, but did you HAVE to make the Cardinals the team that your character dislikes? You a Cubs fan or something? ;)

These stories are beautiful.

Finally... A Lit author who knows the difference between "imply" and "infer", as well as the proper usage of each! I didn't think it would ever happen! Congratulations!!!

OMG!

This was the most delightful story and characters I've read! 👀 There were so many great lines that I had to write some of them down. Like:

"Oh, Christ. This might have been the gentlest, slowest Inquisition in the world, but it was an Inquisition nonetheless. I took a deep breath."

This section caused me to have soda come out my nose. Dude - warn a buddy in the future! 😉

- pal

the social interplay is a lot of fun

I just wish the ethnic stereotyping could have been toned down a bit.

Nice continuation.

Pat is a lucky guy!!! Tanya sounds really HOT...

Loving it. Even if it is a bit crazy.

god, funny. so many people and problem. ither convert to Tanya's faith or work in the school office as she is a real woman

Brilliant funny well crafted characters hot in places. All in all this is great and looking forward to parts 4-6 BardnotBard