All Comments on 'A Strange Compulsion Ch. 01'

Like the story a lot. Next chapter please. AAAA++++

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Great insight to what mother and sister really think.

Outstanding! Can’t wait for more. I want him to have a baby with his sister…

Excellent story, well told and a full 5 stars. I cant wait to read the next chapter!

More, please

6*

Tc

Please continue your story.

sorry but meh

I found the story rushed. Too much happens in just 2 pages. I fear it will be just a collection of women in the story. Women who don't have personality. You introduce 6 girls in the first chapter and except "they're hot" we don't know anything about them. We can't relate to them like this and that makes the sex meaningless.

more.

Oh, well well. The girl has talent.

Great story. Awesome start. I like the premise. Jason is soon to be a very popular man. He’ll also be very busy with much sex. I’m wondering if he will realize that his new power to see through someone’s eyes can also be used to experience what they are feeling, including the massive orgasmic pleasures he’s giving his partners.

Story is well written. Please keep going.

This is GREAT!! Create an entire series of all of his continued conquests.

“I want more”

Bob

please continue.

So sexy. GIVE ME MORE.

This is a great start. This has the potential to be an incredible series

Oh more please, hot n sexy and hopefully more to cum.

I loved it. I wish the author doesn't keep us waiting for too long for every new part. Incest and sexual interactions between nonpopular boys with popular/attractive girls/teachers are among my favorite topics in erotic fiction. I'd like to thank and congratulate the author for the first chapter that I have enjoyed a lot. I only wish it doesn't turn into the classical fuckfest most stories turn into with the girls being gang-banged for lots of males. Again thanks, and keep the good job.

It has some solid ideas but the actual writing was rather lacking. The dialogue felt stilted and unnatural. And the pace was off. Over all not terrible but lots of room for improvement!

Can’t wait to read the next installment 😁

Awesome start

Ahh yes, the old magic trying trick. Can't believe he didn't nail his mom when he had the chance. Oh well, maybe later. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Very creative. Many guys would like a ring like that and for only 3 dollars

Really hoping to get a new chapter soon! I love it

more,.... pleeaaaase?

U really enjoyed this story! Please continue!

Definitely waiting for part 2!

hope you add to both these stories

Can't wait for the next chapter. Great story.

This story is great but it requires a bit more inter dialogue and descriptive details. Rawlyrawls and slickingstocking have great background atmosphere. Other than that I love the direction of this story!

Need more chapters

loved it

I'm looking forward to reading more! <3

How could his mom give birth at ten years old???

His mom is 42

I hope the twincest part will be kino considering that weak body can be a sign of early fast purging

Why are all the authors on this site writing about extremely large cocks? I personally have a cock much smaller than the one described, but still on the larger side of average at 6 3/4" not especially thick or thin and I have been rejected at least once because I was too big, and I can't just pound away because that often causes pain from hitting the cervix. People need to be more realistic about the downsides to really big dicks and then men might not be so hung up on it.

no matter how big your 'cock' is, you NEVER hit a woman's cervix with it, despite comments, and authors, that flood this site with total bullshit to that effect. It's anatomically impossible.