All Comments on 'A Strange Family Ch. 02'

by MrIllusion

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Rnlaw44Rnlaw44almost 5 years ago
3rd and 4th chapters

Sure keep it going! You already referenced her 3some thought - have something happen with mom and brother - then whole family can get going!! 🔥

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Very exciting

The brother and sister should fuck next. With the mother and father watching. Then all four of them naked playing hosey in the pool with the mom sitting on her son's shoulder and the sister doing the same with her dad. Then playfully groping, touching, kissing, licking their pussies, sucking their cocks and fucking side by side.

JSipesJSipesalmost 5 years ago
Don’t stop now!

Mom could walk in on Dad feasting on Daughters milk and join him. She has already expressed a desire to suck her breasts in front of Dad. In other chapters the brother could join the family fun. Keep it going!

bulok1979bulok1979almost 5 years ago

how about mom joins in

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

More, please!

anonoftimeanonoftimealmost 5 years ago
Next

Personally, I think a scene where the narration goes back to the brother and he spies on the sister and father would be hot. He's surprised by it but cant exactly blames them. Sister ends up showering or something and brother enters the bathroom. Sis thinks its father and says "come on in" but cant see who it is due to shampoo. So brother enters and immediately enters her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

If you stop now this will be an unfinished series. Clearly the siblings are interested in each other and the father makes a reference to mother’s kinkiness not to mention the possibilities and consequences of unprotected sex.

RodimusMikeRodimusMikealmost 5 years ago
I agree

This clearly needs resolusion,why would only Son fucks his Mother,and Daughter fucks Father be the end of it,like others have said,the whole family should get together,except the Husband Jorge,this guy sounds like a douchebag and Paige should dump his sorry ass,so as others said write a Chapter 3 so we can see Brother & Sister go at it,and also have the whole family drink Paige's milk like it was written in the stories.That is all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
We need moreee

Please continue the story, a double penetration of both of them in entire family gangbang would be great, and maybe they both fucking inside the pool at once without knowing the other one is doing the same would be so horny..

PrinzmettlePrinzmettleover 4 years ago
More would be wonderful

And it does scream for a part 3.

BTW, a commenter on ch 1 didn't like the repeated references to big tits and big cock. Fie on him. They keep me titillated and hot for the action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Need more chapters!!

It really is a great story. We need many more chapters!!

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 4 years ago
Needs 2 more

1 with bro and sis and 1 with all together after sis leaves Jorge.

JustFriends49JustFriends49over 4 years ago
More Please

I’m really enjoying the playful and fetish filled fun. Absolutely write more and more.

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 4 years ago
Make it a trilogy

With all of the teasing Paige gave her brother in Ch. 01, he needs to get with her at least once before the story wraps up.

beardedbandit62beardedbandit62over 4 years ago
Sequel please

I think a sequel would be a fine addition to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
sequel

sequel please

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
please make a sequel

it'll be so hot, they have to double team them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Oops! Guess they didn’t think about that!

Maybe the sister and mother get pregnant because there’s no mention of any contraceptives. Maybe they both get pregnant with twins. Explore the pregnant sex, and the discovery that they are both pregnant. I think that could be interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
chapter 3 pleace

mother daughter get pregnant

buy son and father

family orgy

switching room 's

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapter 3 please

Think there is definitely more life to this brother sister or they catch each other and join in

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
SEQUEL PLEASE!

Brother/sister have to be part 3. Although Mom is super hot - threesome?

Sexy_Bear1Sexy_Bear1over 3 years ago

I absolutely loved it and I'd love to see multiple parts continuing this story forward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MORE

I think a family orgy eventually. Jorge is having an affair with Melissa so divorce him. Mom is obviously bi so it all works out. End that one with Paige (or mom) pregnant from all the sperm both men have deposited.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Pregnant family

Write a sequel with pregnancy and anal stuff

BizarreSmallsBizarreSmallsabout 3 years ago
sequel

How about brother and sister now? then all of them together? or all together and swapping back and forth?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Why not continue with brother and sister having sex with their parents awareness

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

continue the story please

SneakyVicSneakyVicover 2 years ago

Hopefully you will continue with this story

Quarterback11Quarterback11over 2 years ago

Please please please more. Damn that was hot

Dra1108Dra1108over 2 years ago

Super hot!!!

Please continue

JhobbykatJhobbykatover 2 years ago

You gotta write part three, maybe family all together.

Loved it!!

NallusNallusalmost 2 years ago

Of course we would love a third chapter, with the women leading the way!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yes, please add a 3rd chapter, with all involved, maybe even ff and mm?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would kill for another story!!! So fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great writing - the milk fixation ruins it for me however ..but whatever floats your boat - in this case milk lol

cursrahcursrahover 1 year ago

please write more of this story and characters

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