- Incest/Taboo
- A String of Flowers
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All Comments on 'A String of Flowers'
by sirajahmed10
- 22 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoyou did a great job the best thing was talking between them but you can work on talking and add more passion to that talking but still this was great and i loved your story and it is first time i read your story but will read all now jenny_bi_99@yahoo.co.uk
Anonymousover 14 years agoSiraj bhai, welcome back but story is not enough. chatting between mom and son is a good excited thing but need some passionate sex and anal love between them. there are some boring passage and chat also in it. you need to describe about mothers naked body and age. in indian mother-son story moms naked body is most important specially her buttock. siraj bhai in part 2 you must give us a anal hot story, give some anal things and pregnancy also. please do not late for part 2.....
air_fireover 14 years agoWelcome back. Have read and re read your passions in the past. But this one seems to be a bit cold!
Will wait for the continuation
Anonymousover 14 years agoYes, it could stand some editing, but don't change it very much. The short choppy paragraphs added to its erotic tension. You have a good writing style - stay with it. It's great to hear a new voice instead of the usual fare. At times it was difficult to tell which one was the seducer. Good job!
Anonymousover 14 years agoWelcome back sir. It was well narrated. But we know ur potential. So waiting for more actions from u.
digdaddyrichover 14 years agoA lot of reading to get to him fucking his mother. I hope that the next chapter has as many words explaining what they were feeling as they fucked. The weeks and months after they first fucked should be explained with as much sexual verbiage as getting to the first time.Thanks
Anonymousover 14 years agoWas waiting for a long time for a new story.
Please continue your exciting work !
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI thoroughly enjoyed the armpit feeling and kissing part. You have written as if its a true story.
Anonymousover 13 years agoVery sexy story. Would like to hear more about how they fell in love and how mother now accepts him as lover and even husband. Please tell what happened later and even have an official marriage where mother wants to become wife of son so she can plan her pregnancy by him and fulfill her duty as a wife (and a lover), and have their relationship accepted by other family e.g. father and grandparents.
cruisewestover 12 years agoYou wrote a good one and one that makes the reader's senses rise to greater heights!! Way to go, you should write more about this wondrous couple! You have made them come alive.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI read this with my boyfriend.... We got so horny
Thank you... I was so wet... Perfect romantic story
shang40over 8 years agoमाया, तू योग्य जागी केसाळ आहेस ल त्या जागा मला फार आवडतात
अगदी पहिल्या स्पर्शापासून शाम आईला त्यासाठी प्रवृत्त करीत होता व ती त्याचा आनंद घेत रसदार होत होती
कथा फार लवकर संपली अदून ass fucking राहिले आहे
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI was stuck by the conclusion: "he shot his load. He shot his load inside his mother's cunt. He had succeeded in fucking his own mother." For any son that must be a supreme achievement. The boy feels he's ten feet tall and the king of the world. It's possible that other accomplishments can compare with fucking his own mother and blowing his balls up the same cunt he came out of--winning the Nobel Prize for medicine comes to mind--but they are very few. Shooting his semen, the essence of his young masculinity, up inside his own beloved mother, his dear mommy, up where she carried him for nine months, up his own damn birth canal where he issued from into life and the world--that gives a boy the self-confidence and pride that lasts a lifetime. He is now officially a motherfucker, and no one can ever take that title of high honor away from him.
Anonymousover 7 years agoEagerly awaiting the to be continued part with more hot narrative discussions
Anonymousabout 5 years agoCan we get the continuation of this story.... eagerly waiting for second part ....
Anonymousover 4 years agoHi Siraj, It is a good story... but I expect your continuation will be more erotic than 1st part... Can you please send the second part for all your fans..
Anonymousabout 3 years agoIt is once of your nice story from your other submissions... Lift her Sari, Hanky, Exams,...
If you have a continue this story and also your other stories listed above will be a nice experience...
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