by Samuelx
I selected this story mainly just because I was a little repulsed by the subject.
I don't usually like first-person erotica, because it's usually kind of corny-sounding. But yours isn't at all. As a matter of fact, as a Black woman myself, I think your writing was quite believable.
As a matter of fact, I think that you write quite well in general; there were no mistakes to interrupt my enjoyment of this fantasy. And what a credible twist at the end. Didn't see that coming.
Thank you.
NymphStay
What's the matter with your head? Lightning?
Did you get your sister to send in the complimentary comment? You naughty puppy you, being dishonest. Just goes to show how mediocrity and the lack of appreciation and recognition of quality and talent pervades our very existence. Had thought you had gone in for a brain transplant as you appeared to be stuck in the same groove. Think you should ask for your money back or give the brain back to the simian society for the protection of apes and stay with the tried and abused peanut.
I stop by your crap to get a laugh everytime I visit this site. What a clown... Same triva
Nothing more of a turn on then hearing of black women submitting to white.
Loved the story. Hopefully you'll write more. Anxious to see how much more she's ruined.
I love my Nubian sistas, my black women; AND I, TOO, LOVE IT WHEN A WHITE WOMAN PHYSICALLY DOMINATE A BLACK WOMAN; AND SEXUALLY DOMINATE,SEXUALLY CONTROL HER; A WHITE WOMAN OVERPOWERING AND MAKING A BLACK WOMAN SUBMISSIVE TO HER; AS A DOMINATRIX, IN A CAT FIGHT[REAL OR SCRIPTED],ETC.
I THANK YOU AGAIN.IT WAS A GREAT STORY. I AM NOT GOING TO GET TOO RAUNCHY, BUT IT REALLY DID AROUSE ME TO THE POINT WHERE I HAD TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT THE AROUSAL.