by Samuelx
You are either a little slow or just retarded, which is why you keep posting this shit which no one reads or likes. I don't know why the site keeps letting you. I am for helping the handicaped but this is too much!
.. it would make a pretty good sci-fi read.... but I don't see how this is going to fit into Literotica..... no offense meant.
As to some of the other comments - if you don't like it, just say so - but why bother with all the insults?
If you don't like it, don't read it - if you don't like the author's stories, then don't read them.
If you do, and THEN let yourself get angry about it, who is the more foolish one? The author.... or you? lol
while that may be the case this opening is fucking brillant, well written and thought provoking, my only complaint is the length, this really could be a great full length novel
Neither literate nor erotic - I have no idea how this trash qualifies to be published on Literotica.