All Comments on 'A Tale of the Technician Ch. 05'

...editing. Sometimes I think I'm reading.an ESL writer. Good story except Craig it seems likes to giggle and cry.

Find another writer to edit for you--the spell checker will not catch everything.

healthy not health

drown not drowned

bowels not bowls

to, too, two

Keep the story going.

please keep the story going.

looking forward to more

Great story, I love it.

I agree the comments about editing/proof reading. Thank you for your writing talents and keep it coming.

love the story and characters keep writing

While waiting for more chapters to show in several of your other stories, I started checking more out. Bad mistake.

It is now a couple hours after my bedtime and I have yet ANOTHER story to hope will be updated. I hope it is clear that I enjoyed it enormously.

I don't want to sound like its a complaint, but I do wish you would finish up a couple before moving on to the next. They are too good to suffer such lonely ends, abandoned by their author.

please keep them comeing cant wait for the next one

Rarely do I smile this much while reading erotica :)

Great job!

Jason

Yep much better now

Scores 5/5 a great chapter