All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Loves Pt. 02'

Great ending!

5

A charming read. Superior in all respects. How reassuring to find three genuinely good human beings -- even if fictional. Unquestionably 5 stars.

Perfect - I was screaming in my head as the chapter was running out of words, "she needs to be pregnant" and you delivered at the very end. (No pun intended) 5*

Very well done! 5*

Great story. I liked the way things turned out. Nice romantic story. 5stars

An all round good story. Romance? Yes, but so much more. Well done and thank you

I can't help taking pity on Trish...

Definitely bonded with Matt. Great beginning, middle and end. Totally explored human emotions with all 3 main characters. Responsible man and 2 wonderful women. Truly enjoyed. Thank you even though fiction.

Fortunately for Matt, Angie is a forgiving angel. I didn't like that he kept having relations with Trish as long as he did.

I usually give 1 star for LW stories where the dumb ass husband keeps his cheating wife, or especially marries his cheating fiance.

Give me one reason I shouldn't give this story the same treatment? I'll settle for 2 stars since he legit was a good person otherwise AND there was no mention of exclusivity between him and either woman. A weak excuse usually, but it gets you an extra 1 star.

By the way, ironically, this COULD have been an amazing story, if he still had to choose between the two BUT honestly told both about it. Heck, I have experience with poly lifestyle - it's the lying and the cheating part that's the problem.

MATT IS A WEAK WIMPY ASSHOLE WHO HAS NO BALLS TO SSY NO!!! THIS IS NIT ROMANCE, JUST A MANSLUT STORY

Okay, so Trish had a job as an accountant working for the same company as her now ex-husband. So she's making good money already. But she didn't work until their son was full grown, meaning that the initial payments for their home all came from her husband's salary. Then you wrote the following:

"Trish smiled, "My lawyer gave Don an ultimatum - Agree to the proposed settlement or prepare for a court battle he would lose and that would cost him a lot more. Our biggest point of contention was the house. He wanted to sell it and split the profits - we have a ton of equity, but I have refused. And of course, he wasn't happy with the alimony figure. I think Don's lawyer convinced him he was in no position to contest, and he acquiesced."

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SERIOUSLY? She has a fucking job!!! She's not working minimum wage for Jack In The Box, Wendy's, or McDonald's. Their child is fully grown so she's not supporting the boy. What the fuck does she deserve any alimony for if she's getting the whole house free and clear? I lost all respect for Trish right then and there. She's just as dirty as a filthy whore. Don shouldn't have cheated on her, but she didn't give him his fair share either. 🙄

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I totally hated the ending. More macho bullshit fighting. Trish didn’t want the cops involved, but in the end she had to call them out anyway. They got the cart before the horse seeking the restraining order AFTER the altercation instead of before. The only good thing about this chapter was Angie and Trish bonding together and becoming close friends. The rest of it sucked eggs.

Angie deserves someone better than Matthew. 1/5