by Momstheboss
Good content, but the writing is careless. You mis-wrote Rita's name once and there are other lapses. After writing a story, set it aside for at least a week and then read it carefully. You should catch most of the goofs.
A wildy enthusiastic mom is so good to find.
Nice story.
Keep it going
This story was so realistic and believable that I'm sure this happens every day all over the world. I'll bet that at least half of the families on my block have done this many times.
NOT!!!!!!!