by MaryAnderson
So many "nasty" things could happen in this series(?) and I do so hope they do.. (quickly) Thanks for these 2...
Most of the multi chapter stories I read here leave me wondering why the author bothered. Some others I enjoy, but feel that it could have been better written differently. Many have only enough ideas for only one chapter and should leave it at that. On rare occasions I come across a story where I would not change a thing and eagerly look forward to more chapters. This is one of those. Congratulations!
The writing and descriptions continue to be very good. I am hoping for less consent from Helga. She is too ready to go along with her situation.