All Comments on 'A Teacher's Way Out of a Dilemma Ch. 01'

Looking forward to Chapter 2.

This story will be hotter if you take the time to show she has conflicting emotions-it seems she just made the call to her husband without any conflict at all. Slow it down a bit and imagine what she and her husband might actually be thinking. That will make the sex scenes hotter.

about this being made hotter by more attention being paid to the thoughts of the characters involved.

But I see some of that as being implicit already and look forward to where this goes next.

wanting more

GREAT

brilliant story barb can't wait to read more awesome start. this has got my full attention in more ways than one.

i think your pacing of eroticism is very good. i don't think moral issues count at all, this is about sex. i think your personal thoughts have contributed to the story and it will be interesting to see how it develops.

Good start, I hope it's going to continue the same way.

I think the pace of the story is fine and you have established the storyline within its context. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

A good build up for what looks to be a promising hot story

Will have my wife to read at the same time, hopefully this will give her a real TURN ON. She has a liking for black stories