by nightstalker1960
Would've been better for me without the aunt. Kind of annoyed me that she was present. Good story though. Just didn't do anything for me.
Is this a repost of an older story?
It seemed like incidents (Jason's first glimpse of his aunts new tits, for example) had either been edited out, or never written. Sequencing therefore felt off and detracted from my enjoyment of the story.
Very hot story! While shorter than I normally like this has twists and turns to make it interesting, while setting the stage for another chapter. Looking forward to reading more!
Just spotted a slight mistake; Leslie thought of Jessica as her sister AND as her sister-in-law. I assume you at some point hadn't decided..
Part 2?
Very HOT and arousing story. From an accident on the ladder to Jason screwing his aunt and now his Mom; where they both came onto him. So HOT .... hopefully, when they sober up, they both will want more and Jason can certainly give them what they need. Maybe both sisters, will work out a way they can both have him. Jason, could learn a lot from them both and be taught how to last longer and not cum so soon. Cannot wait until the next chapter. Thank you.
Can you plz give us more of an ending to these stories instead of cutting them off and leaving us hanging here? There's so much more story to tell with each of these posts but you never continue them. Is this intentional so we can kinda pick our own ending for them or are you just being cruel? Plz give us more tho! :-p
When you're changing scenes, you might want to add something, such as a line 10-15 plus or equal characters, as a transition.
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For example, on the last page it goes from Jason and Leslie's last fuck to the very next paragraph starting with "Jessica rolled over, wincing as her head throbbed..." There are several places where it just jumps like this, and it's rather jarring. As the writer, you know the scene is changing, but the readers don't.
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Other than that, very good except for an ending that was rather abrupt.
...I don't buy the premise any woman gets hot because a man is well hung and much less a mother feeling one almost enter her.
That said, it was a comical situation of how she got hung up in the attic opening, then her sister displaying her enhanced boobs. Both encounters were hot, and I'm glad you didn't make it a threesome. Hot sex, great detail. 5.
Definitely an unexpected surprise for him to fuck his aunt as well though. I liked it. 5/5
As said before an added twist fucking his Aunt. It's good to have an attentive Nephew around to take care of things. Especially when he's got Big cock. I could and have ridden his cock all day. Fuck Yes. TBC
Super hot first scene (despite it being hard to understand the positioning between them, the stairs, and the attic opening). I didn't like the salacious aunt sex. Felt it detracted from the story. :(
I prefer B and C cup perky tits and A over D, D tits droop even on very young women... I prefer board flat over fake ALL DAY LONG!!!
I fucked both my aunt and mom knocked them both up 3 of us living together raising my six kids both each had three both started doing gangbangs with my friends both end up being knocked up again by the guys