All Comments on 'A Touching Climax'

The acorn didn't fall far from tree and was greatly overshadowed... this time.

"There other son was eight."

That was as far as I got. Learn spelling and grammar or get an editor.

I'm guessing you wanted to rush the story and finish it, but the first half is good and I give you credit for that. To the grammar police, "There, their, they're" or any other type of word that is easily error-ridden... give it a rest. The author did a fine job regardless.

Loved this story but the dad is... well obviously he's worth 5 stars, isn't he?

Aw sugah...so different than the lil popsicle petes you've been with.

Did he leave her on the date or what?

Thanks

Try writing a story yourself. To Ashton . Loved it!!

😊

Why are people making comments about spilling 😢😢😢😢

Love your stories❤️

Hot Story 5 stars. Looked the build up, very good progression. Enjoyed how it went from the son to the dad.

Your disregard for impregnating young girls is revolting.

Enough......So long Ass hole

Really good work. I enjoyed her cheeky banter and the underlying hint that she wasn't so clueless and innocent after all. Very entertaining.

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What about the son and the father next time as a reunion 😀