All Comments on 'A Traditional Swim'

Very nice indeed - thank you!

A superb account - I'm jealous!!

All sexual swimmers [including the females] should be both 'cunt shaven' and totally naked, preparing for either 'anal or vaginal' sex.

And I hope you continue with the next chapter

I really enjoyed reading your story. I liked the developing relationship between Sara and you.

Well done. If it's a true story, you are a lucky man! If fiction, very nicely crafted!

I particularly love the developing relationship, rather romantic in a dream come true kind of way.... Very well done indeed!!! You have a wonderful way with words....M32

Excellent story, kept me interested. Can't wait to see how it continues.

Your references to the AANR and TNS suggest that you are a long-time nudist. I remember being at a Y when the males were allowed to swim nude. Too bad, when the Ys went coed, that the tradition was not continued.

My wife and I used to belong to a non-landed nudist club that held nude swims once a month during the winter at a local Y. The nudist club rented the Y for a few hours. It was a private event not advertised to the public. The swims were coed, of course, and everyone was expected to be nude. I loved walking around nude in front of the other women, especially the younger ones.

The premise of your story is unrealistic because the Y allowed a CFNM event to take place. I think it would have been more realistic for the Y to advertise the swim as being “clothing optional” for women. That way some of the woman may have been nude and some of them may have kept their swim suits on. After all, some women are more modest than others when it comes to swimming in the buff, especially if they’ve never done that before. Also, why were there no couples attending?

Your final two paragraphs are a complete fantasy, something more suited for a swinger’s club. The ending just doesn’t make any sense in this context. On the one hand, Mindy is trying to enforce the rules but, on the other hand, she has no problems whatsoever when Sara decides that she wants to have sex with Harry. At least it was only the three of them remaining at the time so I guess I could see that happening. Also, more time could have been spent at the end describing the sex. It seemed like it was over before it began.

All in all, it was a very enjoyable read.

Would be good to have more pools around the world adopt a night to traditional swimming or even nude swimming. lest then it would bring a community together of sorts.

It does feel great swimming nude other people looking at you.

That's what they are, I don't even own one. Great story so far, first one in a while that all the players aren't in High School.

Nice folks, story, sex. More’s acomin!

I loved the scenario, I could almost see myself in such a situation and acting similarly.

Knowing that, one could see why I found the story to be very erotic.

WTF is CFNM? A nice quick romp story with a satisfying climax. Thank you, four stars.

But it's been my experience that fornication in hot water is difficult because all the woman's natural lubrication is quickly washed away.

It's frustrating.

Awwww!

Excellent story. I'm always amused by comments regarding how the stories have scenes that do not reflect the rules of conduct in real life. These are fantasies after all (and if not, then rules were broken and would have added to the excitement).

I personally don't mind some literary license unless it gets too unbelievable.

I look forward to more of the story.

Liked the story except for him getting completely shaved. The visual of a 50+ man naked man complete shaved of all his hair to look like a sissy boy is a big turn off.

Great story. What I loved was that they ended up fucking in front of the others.

This was a great story! Completely logical and believable. I loved the part where he got completely shaved. Since I am, too, I know what a great feeling it is to swim nude with no body hair. Simply wonderful! Another part where Sara showed up smooth shaved is super. Good job. Keep up the good writing.

Just love your stories. You either have had a very exciting life or you have a vivid imagination! Either way it makes nice reading.

It's har...oops difficult to be dishonest when you're nude. I definitely enjoyed this story and will be reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.