All Comments on 'A Very English Family Ch. 02'

keep going, love to read Ch.03

I like how they're all comfortable with each other.

But just tell it between the boys and girls please.

But maybe if the boys play that could be gay male category.

All up please keep going.

Thank you for including some light and comical/sexy action between the brothers. That opens up so many perverse possibilities in future chapters.

I think some dramatic tension could be brought in if one or more members of the family begins to date. Maybe you could introduce a Father and Daughter. Or two cousins.

Anyway, sexy story and likable characters. I would love to see a Chapter 3.

Very good start and chapter, good setting for the guys enjoy each error totally and the girls too. Allowing for a Gay and Lez weekend that all can watch and look forward too.Then the toys to add to the fun and adventure.

Thank you everybody for your most excellent comments.

I've already written the next three chapters but before I post them I go through each one many times as I search for errors and usually make copious amendments. And even when I think I've finished I like to read the words carefully again (and usually make more amendments!) so it'll probably be a few more weeks before they're visible here.

Nevertheless, the theme of each chapter is set - so the next one will involve a threesome between the children and that will be followed by more brotherly action - in other words please be aware (or warned) that the chapter 3 is mainly gay.

Chapter 4 is almost exclusively DP action within the family and chapter 5 is a more general love-in with a few peripheral characters thrown in, just to indicate that the family is settling happily into it's new environment.

But I've no great intention of extending the story beyond that - however good a story is, it can get boring if it goes on for too long. In a way I'd love to add many more characters but it all gets too involved and untidy, especially for me!

Hope that's all ok - I know that I won't please everyone and I know that crossing the line into gay stuff goes against the grain to many but in this story it's a necessary extension of the all-round family activity.

Great story so far - keep up the good work :)

Not particularly interested in the gay bits so would prefer the story without them or kept to a minimum.

What a bloody excellent story. An R rated version of ' The Durrells ' well done.

This was a good story, I like the way you ended it, as so you can add more chapters if you wish.

Love the story but not sure I care much for Andy.

@Chris7sw I actually enjoyed the gay scene, that set a very delightful story, shyness, plus ice breaking into the explosion and a bit of a tease from Andy.

Not sure why people have a hard time with it, yet LOVE the lesbian acts. Each member showed love and they shared. 6 years late, but I'm loving the series so far!