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2armoured2armouredover 3 years ago
True?

Has a ring of truth so I give you the benefit of the doubt. Did you impregnate her?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You need to learn how to spell 'waist' so you can stop throwing things away....

Ray RobertsRay Robertsabout 1 year ago

Aways the ring of "truth" has an attraction to all male/female sexual encounters and this story has the ring of truth all over it, which leads me to give it a 4*

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Yes, please fix that “one leg went up around my waste”… it ruins the mood of the story!

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Now, when I read back over my first stories, I can see how badly they need re-writing. Maybe, I will, if I get time. I just hope my later ones are better. My sincere thanks for some of the very kind comments that I have received recently, they make it all the more rewarding.