All Comments on 'A Very Personal Christmas Gift'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WOW

A very good story ... a great loving wife story

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
a refreshing twist

A truly moving story that shows that love is not a prison and that going beyond the artifical imposed

imposed by society can re-spark deeper love and affection between two people. Look forward to more

adventures in shared passions and adventures

ryu77ryu77over 19 years ago
Stop it with the society-is-wrong bullshit....

It is an example that even in an open marriage, problems can occur. Even though she had liberties to have sexual adventures, she wanted to do something for herself (SELFISH). The husband had a lucky break, but they have to be careful in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Close call

This was not about a little excitement. She was so upset that if Tony wasn't gay it could have turned into an affair.

Anyway the author was unique in his approach. That made the story a good read.

sacksackover 19 years ago
very difficult to do....

It's hard to write about a conversation, interspersing the thoughts of one of the participants. You pulled this off rather masterly!! A very well written story that resonates in the memory long after you have read it!

howardb44howardb44over 19 years ago
Fine story. Fine writer.

This is a wonderful story and you are a fine writer. Just when I start to think that I have some writing ability, I find the work of someone like you, and I realize how shabby I am. lol

SabledrakeSabledrakeover 19 years ago
Very good!

Not at all what I was expecting, and I'm glad. Really got into the emotions. These were real people. Excellent work.

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Silence has a rhythm all its own.

Your prose is very poetic. A well told story, full of all the angst of a long-term relationship. ~Imp

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
Beautifully written

Your words were fabulous and your story was believable and riveting. There are couples who talk about everything and forgive anything. You've done a great job of capturing the pros and cons of that kind of relationship. Thanks for sharing this with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not much else to say

Great real story. am at a loss for words as to what to say. It is so true world situation. Great job

lalailalaiover 19 years ago
beautifully written

beautiful!:)

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Very enjoyalbe story

The anti wimp patrol would dump on the hero but I enjoyed it.

I admit that what was said did not justify the three or four days of sufferent that he went through.

BobNbobbiBobNbobbialmost 13 years ago
Very real life . . .

. . . and though we all aim for that when we write stories, we don't always get there. I loved the conversations between husband and wife; so believably disjointed.

ohioohioalmost 13 years ago
A happy story and a kind of sad one....

and beautifully written, very engaging.

Thanks, ohio

fisheronefisheroneover 7 years ago
Marriage almost divided

Far too many times couples let distance creep in.

It is a bad idea for spouses to go to holiday parties alone. To things happen with drinks that don't have a spouse to help us stay intact. This story ends well but shows the potential of a broken household.

Adam RightmannAdam Rightmannabout 5 years ago
It could have been a difficult painful story

But it ended kind of sweet, thanks!

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Why

Why is this sweet or loving? She was going to fuck Tony, but he turned her down because he was gay and then she comes home to husband. Nothing loving here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
There will not

Be a HappyNew Year.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
“Why, don’t you think I can be in love with you, and have my adventures too?

Yes, you can, but not as my wife. I'll start the paperwork first thing in the morning.

RuttweilerRuttweiler9 months ago
Wonderful!

Too bad this Author never kept writing.

RuttweilerRuttweiler9 months ago
I just read the comments.

When this lovely, feeling story was written in 2004, its poignancy and tenderness was recognized by many of the readers. When I look at the latest comments, from the last few years, I noticed the intrusion of the Nazis.

What a bunch of assholes, with their complete blindness at deep human emotion, of long-term relationships, and the depth of love revealed by naked trust. All these miserable incels care about is bleating their absolute conviction that women are property. To be controlled or disposed of.

Witness the alt-right infection.

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