All Comments on 'A Very Special "Girl" Ch. 01'

That would be the ultimate fantasy realization to find a beautiful girl, fall in love, and then find out she has something "extra" to fall in love with also, and be the envy of your peers.

-V-

I have read both parts, and I look forward to more. This topic is often hard to broach You did it so smoothly and in a manner that is not at all offensive making this story very enjoyable to read!

Sometimes stories are just stories... they can be written well with interesting scenes, but it's "just a story" for the author. This... from the looks of your other stories and stuff, this is a deep fantasy for you. (Really floats my boat too!) The fact that you shared it, and therefore so much of what's inside you... that's totally hot. I wish every story were as honest as this one!

One suggestion: I would remove the quotation marks in the title. I think they tip off the reader too much as to where the story will be going. Better, I think, to surprise the reader, along with Christian.

That said, this is an excellent treatment of a story angle that could easily have been cheesy, sleazy, and exploitative. Thank you!

Does she have a pussy, too ??? That would explain her earlier comments, and the pictures she asked about ...

I anxiously await your next installment, and how it will all come about for the two of them ...

Looking good so far