All Comments on 'A Very Special "Girl" Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Made Me Horny

Redhead with freckles, so hot.

Keep them coming.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Off the chain!

Tight story.Keep up the work.

Victor1964Victor1964almost 19 years ago
Sexy

I have read all of your stories and love them. I hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please Continue

Nicely done...without the usual "shock and awe"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow

the only dissapointment is that there isnt a sequel, keep up the great work :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
amazing

Please finish this story, or even better, continue to write new chapters in the series! It is too good to go unfinished or at least un-updated for so long!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
one more plzz

yo that was awesome . i was looking forward to one more. make it a orgy.

obiwan9962obiwan9962over 15 years ago
yum

still waiting for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very well written

I humbly beseech you to continue this wonderful story.

freemic3040freemic3040almost 15 years ago
PLEASE

Please write more of this story!!! The "to be continued" is such a tease! I want more of this story!!!

HedonistusHedonistusabout 14 years ago
My Own Phantasy.

It really is my own phantasy to meet a girl THIS special.

You MUST write more, Christian.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

You, uh, watch a lot of porn, don't you? I mean, all those lines sound like they were lifted straight out of... well, okay, obviously the female porn stars wouldn't say much about wanting to shoot off their cocks, but shemale porn stars do. Frankly, the entire thing is written exactly like a porno.

Dude, if I wanted to read a porno, I'd go and watch one with subtitles.

Sexy scenes, but... I hate being blunt, the way the scenes were delivered could have been written better. Keep practicing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome story man, keep writing

these stories of hermaphrodites make me hard in an instant

MhoramIIIMhoramIIIabout 13 years ago
Great story...

I've been reading and beating off to this story for awhile. I'd love a continuation where she fucks him too.. Please?

Keep up the good work!

MhoramIIIMhoramIIIover 12 years ago
Tiffany needs to fuck Christian!

Yeah, this is a scenario I've dreamed about... It'd be grea if Tiffany fucked Christian... Something I dream about!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Dude...

That was awesome, man!

You have to write a third chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
So ???

You have now played into every man's basic "wet dream" ... Now, all you have to do is to top yourself with a final chapter ... if you can ...

Go for it !!!

MinibeasrMinibeasrabout 12 years ago
Got me so hard

This is a dream for me, never to be lived, but you make it a reality. There has to be more, after all Tiff has yet to delve her cock deep into your ass and leave her seed.

Go for it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
more !!! maybe another boy or a little sister of hers

more !!! maybe another boy or a little sister of hers

magpieolasmagpieolasover 8 years ago
Damn!

That was hot. The best of both worlds between her legs. Please more!

lovingeatingitalllovingeatingitallabout 8 years ago
Girl of my dreams!

Whew! I'm in l l l l lust! My tongue is hard as my cock! My mouth is watering too! You have truly brought a "Special" young lady to life for me. So very delicious too, with flowing pussy juices and spurting cock sauce!

Thank you! More please,,,,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice!!!

I really loved your stories , am leaking cum bi the pound. Keep up the good work

Client8Client8almost 3 years ago

I do have a suggestion: make this story into a full blown novel.

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