All Comments on 'A Visit to Daddy's Work'

Welcome and thanks for this sweet story. The almost little girl language helps set the daddy/baby tone. Unless it is deeply personal to you, the use of lower case 'i' and upper/lower case doubles on us, we, etc...is often annoying for most readers. It doesn't further the relationship any as you have already set that well.

Thank you for your comment. i will try and remember when writing stories it's one of the protocols i was taught, it is something i have got used to doing.

Thank you for reading and i very much appreciate your feedback

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