All Comments on 'A Walk in the Park'

As a guy who loves reading lesbian.....5 out of 5 isn't strong enough.....can I do 10 out of 5????

Granted, I don't have much experience with seduction, but that seemed quick for a hetero girl to go all the way. It was erotic, though.

I guess they don't have mosquitos wherever this story was set [grin]. I've been there. You don't notice at the time, but you feel the bites later.

Five stars for sure. Not as epic as "Busy Fingers," which really took its time, but still better than 99% of Literotica stories. Thanks for writing and posting it!!!

...I've ever read! Thanks.

we need to know what happens next with the now ex and do they start dating or just friends with benefits during leannes lesbian curious training?

They may not have walked very far but, they sure had an experience for Leanne. A real good story. Keep it up.

just one of the best stories on girl-girl sex. Well written and so HOT! Please d a follow up/

it will be a very study long course, hopefully.

and, as happy as they were making each other, there is no reason for Carly's tongue to be weeping. (sorry, I know it was a typo, but I couldn't resist)

happy

see, even commenters make mistakes.

A wonderful story and superbly told. Thank you.

I just loved this. What she thought, what she felt, what she did... This was wonderful. Mmmm.

Might be helpful to hear from a lesbian. You wrote a tremendously seenual, loving story. This is my 2nd readthrough & it is just about perfect. Thoughtful, loving, beautifully detailed & emotionally stunning. Wonderful characters as well. I'm in love!

This was No walk in the park story. The characters are interesting and there's good potential in the storyline. Looking forward to its continuance.

I loved how this one came together, and am looking forward to chapter 2. Thank you for sharing it with us!

I think this may be the best lesbian scene i have read. Amazing physicality to it, I could follow every move, one to the next. Wonderful job.

Superb! So exciting, and sensitively written.

Superb story, well-written xxxxxx

Absolutely Loved this story.

I flicked myself off reading this remembering times i made out with other girls especially enjoying nakedness outdoors in warm weather. My first time with a girl at a sleepover a friend i grew up with went to school with and was a best friend. We bathed and showered together since we knew each other and at sleepovers slept together often cuddled and wrapped around each other. We both began puberty together and watched each other grow in many ways from breasts to pubes and i hated having pubes and began shaving quite early. It happened one night when diane said she would like to be smooth as well as she heard her older sister say boys love girls who are shaved. She asked me to help and i showed her how i did it and she tried then and i ended up doing it for her and it was the first time id touched another girls vagina. She was wet as i shaved her but her vagina was wet with her own juice as well and i found myself getting wet as well. I finished shaving her and wiped her dry and saw her juice leak still so wiped it as well and she was whimpering so i kept wiping and she was raising up to meet my touch. Next wipe she touched me and i realised how wet i really was as her fingers slid between my folds and i although surprised moaned as it felt good. It happened quite naturally and we ended up kissing and exploring each other and making each other orgasm very quickly after. We cuddled naked together and began kissing and touching again and soon were lapping and fingering each others sex and orgasming again. That was incredible she said whispering and i said i guess being smooth for boys works for girls as well. We often spent time like this together and often enjoyed time outdoors which we both loved doing especially after a party or coming home after a night out and having a naughty fumble in a park or somewhere quiet as it was more of a turn on for us both outdoors. We both have had a few boyfriends and know who was each others first time with and tell each other everything we do and still enjoy being with each other except now we go to bed just naked together no point in dressing for bed when all you do is undress is there. Lucy a quite bisexual person in the UK

Some of my best orgasms have been with other girls and im open minded about my sexuality. Iv often been asked do i have a bf and replied no i havnt a bf or a gf at the moment to see what reaction i get and have enjoyed seeing peoples reaction. Sometimes if i like who im talking too ill follow it with only a girl knows how to make another girl orgasm better and have had a lot of fun with other girls whos curiousity has spiked by what iv said. Sometimes a simple kiss has resulted in ravenous sex with another girl and enjoying what i love most tasting another girls sex and giving her the orgasms i have told her about. I love outdoor fun with guys and girls but its different with another girl just more intense and satisfying for me and i just love warm weather as it just presses all my i need sex buttons. I have lesbian and bisexual friends so besides guys who i enjoy as well im never having a dry spell so to speak but love pushing boundaries with new people and getting the result im looking for with another girl getting to know her a lot better sexually. I prefer girls like myself slim almost boyish and definately not the butch type girls who assume they are manly in a relationship. I dont object to vibrators and dildos and have a lesbian friend that has a very nice strap on and have enjoyed but love being in a naked 69 tasting and making a girl orgasm with my lips tongue and fingers and like anal play with the right person. AVA in Ireland xoxo