All Comments on 'A Walk in the Park Ch. 02'

pretty good, I don't think I read ch 1 though, I guess her ex-boyfriend did not know what he was missing

I was disappointed that Carly turned out to be such a manipulatove & selfish ass. I've had it happen to me. Women can be as selfish & manipulative as guys but it seemed so inconsistent with Carly's character. Leane's process of working through her anger & how she was betrayed was exquisitely handled. Her taking charge of her sexuality was wonderful & the harmonies between her & Freya were gorgeously rendered.

This is a greay series. I'd love to see you continue it. It's a wonderful narrative & it'd be wonderful to follow Leane's awakening & growth.

Thanks for this great story.

An enjoyable read

Excellent! Shame about Carly... but it was good that Leanne made that first experience count.

That was an excellent second chapter, five stars.