by Debaser_Lament
Made me so hot. Weak for men like Dan, disgusting but.....
Wow. This was nice, quite nice in fact. Dan has a few unfinished goals and I implore you to write a sequel or two so he can finish what he started. Yes indeedy.
We need more dirty old men stories. Bambigirl44 seems to be the only one on this site that delivers. Keep writing! Well done!
I loved the description of Sarah. If you continue with the old man and young woman fetish it will be wonderful. Or for a twist try a tail that simple expands on your skillful description of gorgeous ladies in other genre.
I think he should have fucked her ass too and made her choke on his dick. Lets have that next time. Also Dan can make his boss happy by sharing Sarah :)
The balance of power is likely to shift. Sarah grows increasingly frustrated that mikes cock cant give her as much pleasure as dans whopper. As much as she hates the feeling, she sometimes longs for his cock and rough ways. She gives in to dan again without telling mike this time. She enjoys the big cock and degradation even more than the 1st time. But later confesses out of guilt. Mike will feel turned on yet humiliated by the incident. He realizes the fantasy has gone too far and will want things to slow down. But lust and dans deviousness will triumph and Sarah will come back for more, and more, and more.
I agree. Please continue this story & fuck Mike, I want to hear of Dan & Sarah going at it all night long, just the two of them!!!!
Definitely well worth the read, and hope to see the story continue!
While the story was longer then I like, the descriptions were good & the idea very good. Please continue. Perhaps Dan cleans up his act some and Sarah begins to seek him out when Mike is not available.
Sarah....don't take it lying down (No do it's good for both of us).Some of the other dudes have the right idea about the next 8 chapters.
It would be good for her to be blackmaled by the hole company and take the girl on a new trip....maybe to Austin TX where I sometimes visit for the Cars.
Anxiuslly aware the New chapter.....piece up our asses.GFunnk.
This is the best fucking cheating wife story on literotica! I am shocked why Debaser_Lament has NOT written more! Anybody has contact with him or knows anything about him?!
Please i need more from this author or with the same tags!
Fat bastard fucks a wife! Need more of this! Contact me please!
This is great story. More parts would be spectacular. Even after all these years I check weekly just in case. Is author still on the site? Definitely want to hear more about these characters. If not, thanks for one great story.
Is there an issue with this? I would like to see the story continue.
Xoxo,
GAB
To person asking about ghost writing this story, plaese do!!!
To the ghost writer below, the original author is not responding to any of our comments and msgs. You should just ghost write it and give the original author some credit in your intro. But yes, please write it and link us!!
Hi everyone!
I have a poll up on the forums (http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1294392) regarding me writing a sequel to this story. I really do not want to upset anyone by writing a sequel and adding to the original author's work. Hence the post and the poll.
xoxo,
Ginny
The link to your poll doesn't work for me, was it taken down? But hell yes, we need a sequel. Do you have any experience writing, GAB, because we need this to be done right!
Omg, this is such a good story and definitely rivals bambigirl's stories. A sequel is a must!! Oh Great Author, please write a sequel!!
Hi, just read the story and it is giving me multiple orgasms...
Will Dan be receiving his blow job on the plane ride back?
Would love a continuation of this --- any chance for that?
This story is one of the great tragedies of the noncon section of this site. It has everything, hot writing with a sexy yet naive young woman, a horrible old man as the antagonist and potential for so much more. And yet...no news after so many years. I hope one day the author comes back to continue as this story sticks out to me as one of the best on this site. Best wishes to the author with whatever they are up to now.
Believe this drivel is a great story? Get a life, at least read some intelligent stories by good authors instead of one about a want to be cuck and a ridiculous pervert. Signed: BTW
Still saddened to see that this doesn't have a sequel. Maybe I should write it?
DonSilver. That would be fantastic, with the original authors blessing of course. But I agree great story needs a follow up.
"Sarah started moaning at the top of her lung." The poor girl only had one? Sorry, I couldn't resist, but there really were too many errors left in this one. But the biggest error was no second chapter. Beauty and the Beast is hot.
I am unlikely to write a direct sequel to this but I have written similar stories (check my profile). Stil I keep coming back thinking this needs a sequel at some point.
Yes, no chance of a follow up from this author as this hot story was published in 2011
Such a shame. Would anyone out there FTDS