All Comments on 'A Week With Mom'

that was intense. i like how you ended it, makes people conclude it anyway they want. you have major talent.

...lots of tension in the build-up, and you finished it at exactly the right point. Agree no part 2, but more stories like this please.

Great story, and I enjoyed reading it all the way through. I also agree with you on those who don't like it. They can FUCK OFF.

Oh boy what a great story, it made me really wet needed to relieve myself, he was so lovingly dominant with his moter and she quite rightly loved it. She was going to be his whore, what a lovely idea. Wish I could meet a man like that. Such A shame there will be no stories of her giving him her body or him taking it, anyway he wanted.

Thanks Veronica Blake x

rgmprojects@myway.com

Don't bother about them knockers! You're among the best!

Brill story, absolutely amazing.

Pity about no sequels. Would have loved to read about their first dinner in a posh restaurant, where she goes to the ladies to remove her bra and knickers before they hit the dance floor where he slowly unbuttons her blouse and then slowly raises her skirt and does all kinds of things to her, for everyone to enjoy. You get my drift?

In any case, hope to read more from your wickedly imaginative pen.

Holtarn. holtarn@hotmail.com

Write more, please.

You are an awesome author and I'm going to check out your other literotica stories & you BOOK!

Please think about the "Next Week with Mom"!!!

The heat from this story came right through my computer! You don't have to be "into" incest to enjoy two people enjoying each other--this is an A+--him slapping her ass was a real plus--my Kim blushes when I slap her ass and watching her face in the mirror makes me cum every time :)

Hot Hot Hot!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story and you took us right through the whole experience of mother and son becoming sexually active. Excellent piece of writing and please kep those stories coming.

I'm not into incest but your story was still hot!! Keep up the good work!! Also, I agree with the others that you need a sequel.

Dude, great story man, very hot, but like all the others have said there should definatley be a sequel, doesn't seem right to just end the story there. Keep up the good work

Im sorry that your a little bitter at the comments you get I for 1 enjoy yor stories , I havent read all of them but those I have read arent bad at all . I like your flair for discription so I vote 75% .

slieman2003@yahoo.com.au

It was a great story, but here are the questions I have: did he have to kill his father or did dad join in? Did they ever get to eat (lol)? Did mom find out that he didn't have a real job? Just being a smart ass, but I really do want more of this story... so help a girl out give me more please.

This was a truly hot and awsome story, keep it going bud.

lOVED THE STORY AND THE WAY YOU TOOK IT FURTHER,PLEASE GO SLOWER IN YOUR NARRATIVE AND EXTEND THE READING PLEASURE.I DO LIKE LONG STORIES AND YOUR THEMES AND STORY LINES ARE ROUGH DIAMONDS.

LOVE. mika

G'Day,

Loved the story. It's nice to read of loving people. I felt it moved a bit fast.

I've read a bit of your other stuff too and enjoyed that as much.

Keep writing.

Thanks

Peter

Tell the others to fuck off!! I've read some of your work and it gets better and better. Keep writting!! I'll read them.

Hot and excellent story, great descriptions of events without going overboard.

A wonderful story of love and Family.... well done.

Great story and I would like to read more. So don't leave us in limbo PLEASE. Write More

Having read several of your stories, I cannot understand why someone would flame you.

Sex with a family member usually requires very intense emotions for the leash of sociiety's mores to be slipped.

In spite of that, your stories show a depth of caring that makes the whole an erotic love story.

Any future offerings will be read with equal enthusiasm.

As someone else has said, I want more! The flow was good (no pun intended ... haha) and it would be interesting to see what happened with the dad ... you know ... the whole leaving and going off into the sunset ...

Makes me thing of my own hot tan long legged mom and how much id like to lick her too

Super story, please write more like this one!

Love it Wicker. You ought to finish it and make a good ending.

This is a great story. I think it needs a sequel. Johnny needs to share her.

I don't understand people bitching about the content of your stories, no one makes them read them and they clearly warn what they are about! If they don't like the content then they shouldn't read!

mom is gone now, i wish i had ...........

rich .........

fantastic..wish i had a sexy mom to make love to !!

L.A. you are a word weaver, i have enjoyed most everything you have posted , there are a few very good story weavers and you`ll always be one of the few at the top, thx for the journey into your minds eye , with thx nathan in georgia!!

In this excellent story, a son, Johnny, has the same desire as any healthy normal son, he yearns to fuck his mother so bad! Every time he's close to her he gets hard, and when he hugs her, his Mom feels every inch of her boy's massive dick, so fat and long! It's the hardest cock his mother has ever felt! She just has to get her son's big stiff dick up her motherly cunt, Johnny's birthplace as son and Mom often like to think about! It doesn't take long for son's stiff prick and mother's needy twat to get together! As her boy is fucking her they talk dirty, Yes, Mom loves to feel her son's cock up where he came from, and Johnny revels in the idea that his cock is visiting places inside his beloved mother's Holy of Holies, her warm, welcoming twat, that no man ever reached before! When her boy blows his big balls up his mother's cunt it's the biggest load of ball cream he's ever shot or his Mom ever received! A love story for the ages!

I stayed hard since mom got of the plane. As a boy I slept with my mom. We were very poor because my father was out drinking and chaseing pussy. I played with her pussy and sucked her tits when he was gone. This story grabed me from the begening. Please keep up the good wrighting.*****

You write some of the sexiest stories on here, thanks for taking the time and effort to do so

I like what I've read so far. Johnny and Sela seem made for each other. Even liked th eoart about the insane friends. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work

hi L A i agree with all the other comments a great story kept me hard for hours just thinking about it keep up the good work

i look forward to reading all your stories and this is no exception.KEEP THEM COMMING

you are one of the great mom son writer in literotica. want more and more mother son hot anal pervert story from you. in this days mother son incest are common, just look about super model stephanie seymour and her 17 year son peter brant jr did on the beach.

Can't imagine what kind of negatives could have been applied to this story. Good read - good story. Keep up the GREAT work.

Where the grammer police mean to you? I find them to be a bore myself, its just a fuck story and a damn good one!k.hyde1@verizon.net

Please keep writing.

This is the shorten version of the original, that I had read several times; so, how do I access the original long version.

"A FAN"!

your style

Excellent story. Hope you write more. Many boys have the same fantasy and you present the idea in a very believable fashion.

What a great read. You won't get any criticism from me on this one - one of my favs so far.

Hope to see more from this. Great story. Thanks alot

Thoroughly enjoyed your entire story, both its' pace and content. A 5 star rating.

Written by a shitty writer. "1*" !

WHEN YOU WRITE A STORY, I LIKE IT THAT YOU DON'T HOLD BACK MUCH. YOU PUT IT ALL OUT THERE. READ ALL COMMENTS WITH A GRAIN OF SALT, THAT WAY IT'S EASY TO SHAKE OFF THE JERKS. YOUR AN OUTSTANDING WRITER, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.............LAROC OF AGES

It's great when a boy and his mother drop all the phony socially-imposed restrictions and just go and do what they really want to do. Johnny wants to shove his big fat prick up his mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between his mother's legs that gave him birth. His mother wants--needs!--her big strong boy's fat young prick up her mommy-cunt, stretching and pounding it like a wild man. Mom keeps cumming like crazy, and when her Johnny gives a big grunt and unloads his heavy balls up between his mother's legs, both of them know that that's where her boy's great big doses of creamy sperm belong.

I've only given this 5 stars because the stupid site won't allow me to give 6 or even 7. Awesome!

What a lovely story. Makes me want my son to do it to me.

That line alone is worth 5 stars. Johnny's cock is big and hard and raring to go. The place he'd come from is his own mother's mommy-hole. Johnny's got a real nice present for his mother's cunt. It's waiting for her in his loaded balls--his huge dose of creamy semen, the best gift a loving boy can ever give his beloved mom.

I would've given that story a rating of 10 stars twice!

my mom and I fuck like this all of the time, I love incest! You are a fucking poet with your words!

The theme of older mother and adult son is most appreciated and the feelings that roll with the story. I would love to see a senior pretty mom story with her adult son. Women are not feeble or dried up in their senior years as most writers suggest. The love can be awesome. Just a thought. Once again thank you. My Mom is gone and wish I could find a mom like this one. Real love will always win out.

loved it-great story, thanks

calling her a bitch a whore and all the other dominating shit.....she had a husband at home treating her like shit so did not need her prick of a son doing the same....he should have been more caring - more loving - more tender with her but no you made him in to a dominating slob who needs to have his balls kicked in....why do this - is it the way you treat your women in your life....what a wanker....

I love it and I agree with you the anonymous commenter's should kiss your ass..

You know how to turn this reader on ..

I'm wet, my nipples are hard and I need to mastrubate after reading this very hot erotic story...

Thank you. ..Don't stop...

If he was so in love with her, and had wanted her for so long, why did he start calling her a whore and a bitch as soon as he got his knob in her mouth? It's not enough she has an abusive husband, now her son starts up the same way; maybe the acorn doesn't fall that far from the tree...

All in all, hot and satisfying, with well-played sex scenes, except for his attitude towards his mom once he got her panties off, it just doesn't ring true, or maybe he's just you and this is how you want to treat your mom once you get her panties off and her legs open...

Loved the sex scenes but I have to agree with some of the recent commentors that abuse is abuse be it physical as the father does or verbal like the son. And treating his mom like that, calling her his whore while making him suck his cock is verbally abusive.

Sorry there is only a 5 to vote with, there should be at least a 10. God reading so keep up the good stories coming.

the stories you write are ever good. I have read 3 so fare and have not found a bad one yet. Keep up the good work.

I nearly read 6 of u r stories,not even getting tired at any single point..rock it....moving on to u r next story man....

Would have been a cock hardener had it not been for the harsh language. How could a son call his mother a whore or bitch, even if she were. But to do so as she is showing the utmost of love... Killed an otherwise great story

How many guys with good looking mothers have wanted to do this..You can't count that high. Just keep up the good work..

Fuck you!

Over to quickly and no part two ( shame )

what a shame , you have to write a part2, you've written so many stories good ones, go ahead write part 2

The combination of sex & love is way more than the sum of parts! Each part adds additional dimensions to the other part. The final result is something very beatiful, & wild, & erotic... the two persons are constantly high without any drugs!

Above particularly goes for mom-son incest because (a) the son loves his mom truly, madly, deeply; (b) he has been infatuated with her so much that his desire has already overcome all psychological taboo & all societal norms; (c) the son will soon realize that his dick is harder with his mom than with any other woman & that when he comes in her, each cell of his body is affected by the temporary state of trance.

You depicted his mom's ass so well that i felt i was there with my mom caressing her shapely ass & equally shapely thighs. When the son's characted slapped his mom's ass with his bare hand i thought i was in 7th heaven and on cloud number 9 at the same time. One of my favorite jack-off fantasies was that my mom lost a stupid bet and i get to hand-spank her on her bare ass while she is over my lap (OTK). I slap her each ass cheek & each thigh twice and after that i gently caress them. I kiss a lot every spot where my hand struck her. I tell her i am sorry & i love her. She tells me she loves me too... she adds that a bet is a bet & tells me to do what i've gotta do. I just caress her ass & her thighs some more..

The best thing about mom-son incest is that the son who fucks his mom is fucking the eoman of his dreams and his 1st love, 2 in 1! Also, he is eith a eoman who loves him more than she loves herself!

Excellent job. Loved the build up. THANK YOU! !!!!

Great story with a wonderful build up. Would of liked a part two though. Have her leaving hubby and coming to live with her son.

One of my favorite stories!!! Thank you very much, well put 2gether, wow!!!

It would have been 5 stars but with no 2nd part only 4 sorry

Love the way they used That really sexual slang on each other. Fuck. Cock. Slut.

Good stroking story!

Very erotic story about a sex starved mom and a love sick son. They realized on her visit and both knew there was no denying their wanton feelings and desires for one another.

Waiting on Chapter/Part 2. She leaving her husband and living w/son and her getting pregnant

I love your stories. You do a very good job. Keep up the good work. Thank you

Ema käis mind vanglas külastamas. Seal oli 54.aastane ema algul seksile vastu, aga mõne tunnipärast ma sain juba teda nikkuda. Kepp kestis kogu öö.

It's like you were describing my life with Mom.

Excellent!

11/10!!!!!

Its always so good when mother and son get together as consenting adults. I can only imagine a mother feels so flattered, so loved and immaculate, getting fucked in the head by nine inches of the dick she birthed. There's no need to gag when true love is involved; slobbery maternal intimacy is like that. A mother spoils the man who has loved her his entire life. She gives him her face and twat, but the womb was always his.

Great story you're a great writer ....

.. there should be a part 2 dad should Hava had his ass handed to him but that's my thoughts any how...,..GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!