All Comments on 'A Weekend of Servitude'

Iono why but it felt more like a straight bi story was hot but more hetero than gay and hard to relate to richard didnt even get a good sex scene that was descriptive it was more of tatiana so hard to get into

Was this accidentally placed in the wrong category? Gay male is for "men loving men". Perhaps this would fit better in BDSM?

If there was a bisexual category I would have placed the story there but the powers that be have resisted requests for such a designation.

Loved this as usual Piggy. Actually I love all your stories. Some people on this site get too hung up on categories, but with the trolls roaming freely in LW, it's hard for an author to use that category for anything.

I so love to read your new postings. Always guaranteed to open new doors of fantasy. Such kinky, lovely openings....er doors.

Gosh this plot is non sense and so poor. It lacks of creativity and waste of time reading all the way through.

1* for this bad written story.

Interesting take annon. Could you be more specific? What didn't you like about the plot and why do you feel it was poorly written?

The first sentence needs a comma after the word "Gosh." Additionally, the word nonsense is one word.

The second sentence is choppy with fragments. Should read "It lacks creativity, and it is a waste of time to read all the way through."

The last sentence please replace bad with badly.

Current grade F