All Comments on 'A Weird One Ch. 18'

FINALLY GODDAMN IT!!!

Good stories series, highly addictive and as much as I

enjoyed reading it, this was a welcome addition as it

is the last.

Madge is still a whore more than a mom, cause in spite

of knocking up Marge, Bobby's dad still had more of a

right to call the kettle black, but whatever, he can

always get himself something better.

Good for Mary, getting what she likes, cause even though

she's a serious tramp, she was always a straight shooter

and I dug that.

Happy for Phil & Gail, hopefully she'll be less of a

game playing hussy and more of a wife to the guy who

sought to please her...but still I've gotta ask, WHAT KIND

OF A MAN DOESN'T LIKE EATING PUSSY!?!?!

Pam is just as much a slattern as her fucking floozy

daughter Natasha...she was fucking around and yet it all

worked out for her in the end. He deserves a big tittied

blonde over a bitch like that.

Good for Shelly...good for her... I guess...Andrea sure as

hell didn't deserve to keep a good man, fuck her. as far

as Gloria, never really gave much of damn for that one.

Tina's epilogue made me laugh my ass off!

I can only imagine the type of shit that will one day

go one between an 18 year old Bobby Junior and Carol...

Hell loads of the younger ladies who were obsessed with

his dad will be after his junk; but mommy's cousin "Aunty

Carol" yeah... Nancy too...

Horray for Vonda, like any really gave a shit about that

annoying bitch...her dad though worries me, what kind of

a black man is so hardup for a white son in law, jesus

christ.

Natasha got what she deserved...I can see her shacking up

with Eddie Wooters and popping out a couple of bastards

that might end up with serious psychological problems.

Finally Bobby always the douche bag but not too bad of one,

I like Becky and how she turned out...good ending for them.

I guess you had to end it sooner or later. Personally, I would have preferred later.

A fun series. I enjoyed every bit of it.

I'm Sorry to see this series end, however you pulled it all together at the end and made things believable, so I applaud you for a job well done. I'm looking forward to your next series and hope that it can be half as enjoyable as this one was!!

Bobby should send Wesley an enormous gift for helping to expose Natasha, for the slut she is (who wants to be married to a slut dumb enough to bring home an STD), and also for the fact that his fling with Natasha, freed up Becky who is great for Bobby.

I might be the only one who read this series who actually likes Madge, I realize she was an admitted slut, but she eventually ended those activities, and remained true to Bobby, Marge, and her Hubby. There wasn't a mention of what she was doing now, other than an assumption that she may still be carrying on with Marge, but I think Becky would be up to a threesome with Madge if the opportunity arose, but not my story and no way I could have done the job JPB did, so I will shut up and just say again~~THANKS FOR THE READ!!

Thanks JPB for one awesome series and I have to admit that I'm sad to see it end.

My only complaints were Becky got added to the story way to late for such an important character and that Bobby's bitch of a mother got off way to lightly as it takes some fucking nerve to divorce Bobby's dad when she is fucking the bit on the side as well.

My favorite series ever! Sorry to see it end.

I know it had to end sooner or later, but I honestly think I would have preferred a more gradual ending, JPB. This final chapter gave no hint that the series was ending until the Epilog and that makes the ending of the very good series a decision not well thought-out, but one born out of the author's uncertainty of how to end the story of Marchant. Regardless, I've thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter, Bob, and will continue to look for your stories every time I log on to Literotica.

This was a pretty abrupt ending to a fairly long series. Would like to see you write another story, but this time develop the sex a bit more, since in most of this story the sex was an afterthought and not very descriptive.

GREAT series! I always love to read your work!

I have to agree this was a GREAT series!! I love the way you slowly built each chapter leaving the reader wanting more and wondering what will happen next. I do have to agree that you should have brought Becky in sooner but it was good. As for Natasha well I figured she would turn out like she did. I even thought she would end up working a corner somewhere. You tied the series up in a nice way and I look forward to reading your next story hope it will be as great as this one was. If I could I would give it more then 5 stars.

But I can only imagine that the story was beginning to be a real chore for Bob instead of being fun to write.

All I can say is; thank you very much for the good story.

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed all of it.

its been a long and great piece of work you have done I am sad to see it go I must admit it was a bit abrupt the ending I wish it was more drawn out but hey all things end sometime

I mean, most of it was pretty could, if improbable.

But the thing that threw it off for me was; Andrea. Seriously? Her husband would rather divorce her than nail her ass? The ass is the hole-y grail for every guy I know.

Seriously, terrific series. It did turn into one massive fuck/suck/eat fest but it was entertaining throughout.

I was glad to see that the fated couple from the beginning didn't reconcile. And that Bobby proved his poiint by marrying the slut, who managed to stay true ever after.

I know it had to come, but a little warning would have been nice. What series am I supposed to read now? While I wish it was Gloria (it sucks that he lost contact with her by the way), I am pleased that he ended up with Becky. I still hate his mom.

I hope you continue writing. Personally I would love it if you just continued this series (pre epilogue) cause I am interested in how Becky won him over plus slutasha had to at least done something to have tried to win him back.

yr stories is one of the best but why did u have to end it so abruptly. what am i to do now? the male lead's character was the best of all the stories i have read and matches to mine. i m gonna miss it

loved it ,sorry it had to end, please keep on with your stories

waiting for the new one

First off, definitely a 5 star given how much I felt so involved with all the characters from beginning to end. I was unlucky, or lucky in a way, to only have picked up reading this when JPB released Chap 15 so I was able to devour through all the parts within a short time.

I can only imagine how interminable the wait must have seemed between releases for those who picked it up right from the beginning.

To be honest, I still held out hopes for issues to be somehow resolved between Bobby and Natasha although that could be just down to my personal preference for romance and "good" endings. It would have allowed things to come to a full circle since I went back and took a peek at the very beginning of Ch 1 and I was reminded of how head-over-heels smitten Bobby was with Natasha at first sight.

Bobby was her very first and they held out so long without intercourse, which made it all the more special.

Bobby obviously had his fair share of secrets, with his evergrowing harem and countless sexual encounters and thus I was hoping he still had it in him to somehow patch things up with her. Obviously she too had to enact great changes on herself as well in order to make it work.

Like a few comments mentioned, the ending did seem a little rushed and I would have liked it to gradually lead up to a conclusive epilogue.

Nevertheless, I thank you JPB from the bottom of my heart for this marvellous work of literature. It kept me up several nights with me voraciously devouring through the many chapters not in search of sexual gratification but simply because I was genuinely eager to find out what happens next.

The feeling of knowing that there's yet another chapter to be read and then the dread when I finally caught up to the latest release is in my opinion, a testament to how much I truly enjoyed reading your stories.

Here's to plenty of great stories from you and wonderful times!

PS: Apologies for this long and ranting comment but I felt your readers deserved publicly seeing how much some of us appreciate your work.

I enjoyed reading every chapter. Not sure what happened with this one, but it had spelling error all over it. While a minor thing, it is very distracting to me and takes away from the overall story, especially when I have seen the others and not noticed errors.

Thanks for a great read

It has been my favorite sexy soap opera and have read each chapter breathelessly as they came out. I understand why stories must end, but i really could have continued enjoying the adventures of Bobby for a long long time. Thank you for sharing.

Mostly well written, very good story line. Occassional lapses with spelling and keeping names straight that were slightly annoying. I feel you took the story as far as it should have gone and ended it quite tidily. Well done.

For 18 chapters Bobby was 18-19 and suddenly he is married for 15 years in the last few paragraphs?? If you can, please do more of this story. It was absolutely fantastic

In a good way

And they lived happily ever after... As if!

CONGRATULATIONS- You capture the wild, weird side of a fanciful young rake. BOB' is totally believable as a character, even if the situations he gets into are pure fantasy. We aren't looking for the Grapes of Wrath when we come to Literotica. The only criticism I have is the ocassional misuse of the verbs "to lie" and "to lay" plus an even less frequent mix up of girls' names. 5 stars is not enough distinction for your fine work. Thank you for sharing it with us,

That was a very good story even if the end is a little rushed. The only thing that bother me is with Natasha and Gail. in the beginning you made it look if Bob has something of special with each but you crushed it for no reason( in my opinion) and we know and he know what he did with the other women! Otherwise the rest is alright no complaint ( only for Natasha and Gail because he asked each them to marry him).

Lovely story shame it couldn't of been bob and Tasha who got married then may be she would have been faithful with boby if they had wed as them two where ment to be but either way damd good story

What the hell?!?! You end this series just like that, but you decide to fuck the reader over by failing to reach a conclusion on all your other storieS.....screw you!

I have been on this site for a long time and have to say this is the best story I have ever read yes alittle rushed but still awesome well done

but fun to reed, for the most part - and I mean the whole 18 chapters. Some parts I would call hilariously funny. The improbable side in my opinion is to a large degree connected to the sex action between Bobby/Rob and his numerous female partners. I find it downright monotonous! In my experience women's preferences are much, much more varied, although I agree that being able to give really, really good oral will endear you to a lot of women. The secret here is that you have to love doing it. On Adult Friend Finder I used to call it my favourite pastime and had a pic of me in action. The same goes for women giving good head: They have to at least like, if possible love doing it. I am less than a year from being 90 and have been sexually active for over 70 years. I have loved doing oral ever since I had my first sex with a woman. I have found a few women who can only get off from vaginal penetration. Most women however, love oral, and get off on it if it's properly done. Early on in my time many were surprised, but oral sex has become much more common. One of the things I find hard to believe in this series is that so many of the male characters seem to have serious problems with it. For my part, oral and manual stimulation is what has kept my sex life going for the last 15 years, after a transuretral prostate resection left me with a serious case of ED, and neither Viagra nor Cialis was any help.

Shit like this makes me want to give up porn. Over and over and over again, same shit ad nauseum.

Because the series was written a little less than four years ago, I had the advantage of reading it as a whole all at once rather than wait for each chapter. I loved it as a whole but I wish the Bobby/Mom/Mary and Bobby/Mom/Madge threesome's were described a little more rather than the same "we did the usual combinations" paragraph. I found those threesome's very hot.

Like others have commented, I thought the ending was rushed. Instead of getting divorced over Madge's pregnancy, I thought it that it would have been better if Bobby's parents and Madge reach an agreement and live together. Everybody wins.

Looking forward to reading all of JPB's other stories! This series gets five stars and a favorite point from me!! Thanks!

I think he should have ended up with gail

I could not put this away and had to read the lot in one go. What a fantastic fantasy.

I am going to do my best to avoid critiquing the plot of the story because it is exactly what you promised it would be. A weird one. A highly improbable story. Instead I am going to focus on the writing itself.

Unfortunately, I didn't find this series to be erotic. In the beginning, your details of the sex scenes were okay. By the time you were a few chapters in, everything was mundane. Instead of describing the sex, you only told us that it happened. At best, you gave us a list of sex acts that were performed, but too many times you basically said "same shit, different day". I honestly got the impression that you were bored with the story before you were even halfway done. By the end of this series, you could summarize the chapters with the following: "School was school, work was work, sex was sex, drama drama drama.

You had far too many characters. So much so, not even you could keep them straight. At one point, you called Gail Gloria. Another time you called someone Maude. I'm not sure if you meant Marge or Madge. To be honest I'm not sure if Maude was a new name or one of the many names you had in this story.

Your spelling and word usage needs major improvement. This story was riddled with problems. Misspelled, misused and even missing words. It made the story a chore to read. Yes, this is a free site. No, you don't receive anything for your time and effort. Yes, it still matters.

I did find your story entertaining and I kept reading because I wanted to see how it ended. I think you had a great idea for a story, and you did execute well on some points. It's just that with the lack of any real details about many things that happened, your chapters felt more like outlines than an actual story. I think with a little more effort and a good editor, this story could have been awesome.

On a separate note, I think you wrapped up the story pretty well. I'm not sure I agree with Bobby ending up with Becky though. I never got the impression he had strong feelings for her, but I suppose she was a better choice than han anyone from his regular harem.

Your stories of a weird one was with out a doubt one of the best saga type stories I have ever read. keep up the great writing.

Well the story was about short conversation and mind game.it was a great one but o nly one thing it lacked was a detailed conversation of bob with his mom about what he is doing and all b'cuse there has to be a listener...bob could have continued with everyone after all Becky do love a gangbang..if you are not busy try to write part 2 of this story...i know readers will love it...

Two basketball team sluts in a family...it would be interesting if part 2 comes

The weird one is the only story I read on this site in series fantastic story I loved it.

If there's part 2 I would love to read that.

Again fantastic and fabulous story.

ive never read a story where i wasnt rooting for a least one of the characters, but this is the one. The only reason i kept with the story til the end was to see something bad happen to a few of the characters, but nothing ever did. Disappointing. And also for an 18 chapter story the sex scenes just got way to repetitive.

5 years after published & still getting comments. Ummm, this is why JPB is a favorite author of mine.

I mean the guy fucks anything that moves.... But is not infected by anything. He does gang bangs... threesomes... Even eats other guys cum out and still nothing?! And how can he have so much sexual prowess? He ain't a god... Atleast make it believable.... The first few chapters I read completely... But the ones after that I skipped the sex part only to read the remaining story plot...

Rather an abrupt ending ,considering all the cross that preceded it.

Read the first 3 chapters, then skipped to the last. I have to guess the author was a girl. Like really, the main character was a walking dildo, who enjoyed eating just about anything. The dildo had no accountability at all, everyone else was cheating scumbags, but the dildo was just a innocent plastic toy. The fight scenes had him always taking a cheapshot and then kicking the guy endlessly in the balls. Can't have the dildo hurting their hands now. Well written, but wow, only in the mind of a girl.

6 years after, I finally came across this little gem.

Are there some spelling/grammar issues? Sure.

Are there some continuity issues? A few.

Are there some issues where characters are mixed up? Yes.

Overall, it is a well crafted story, and obviously set in an area you're familiar with.

The only complaint I can make that drove me absolutely crazy was the Anachronism. Much of the story appeared to be set in the late 1970's/early 1980's, but contained modern references and technology. Bobby has a computer in his room, yet never uses the computer. He enters invoices at work on a computer, but is always running off to the library to write papers. He has a cellphone, but never seems to send text messages. Gail doesn't even use a webcam to keep in touch with her boyfriend. They write letters instead of emails and never talk on the phone like West Point is imprisonment. The girls at work need to be home in case their husband calls...because obviously neither they or their husbands have cellphones. The cars are all dated. And "Teen Dance Club", while they still somewhat exist, they usually don't let people over 21 inside. The Anachronisms at times presented a distraction.

Final Comments: It would have been nice to see Bobby end up with Gail. Ending up with Becky whose boyfriend Natasha was "cheating" on Bobby with, and her father being one of the employees whose job was saved was a little cliche. There were also several opportunities for both Natasha and Gail to redeem themselves in Bobby's eyes, and Gloria/Bobby really should have been given a bigger redemption after basically being drugged and gang raped by a bunch of teenagers. There was a hint that Bobby was going to ask about it, but it never materialized. If you ever get the bug, this is a great story that could benefit from a redux/revision to pad some of the details. The repetitive "School was school" and blah/blah/blah skimming sex scenes could be removed unless something significant occurred. First time with Mom and Marge great, no need to continuously repetitively mention "Met up with Mom and Marge, 69, Anal twice, 69 double blowjob, Anal, left them still going at it." for the every Monday play by play, just like the office basement fuck parade. The repetition just seemed lazy and padded filler instead of resolving story lines.

Overall great story. It would have been nice to have taken a few more chapters to wrap up the story, and the epilogue really deserves a chapter to itself.

My comments are about all the chapters not only the last. I stayed riveted to the story to see what was going to happen next. Good Job and Keep up the good work. I serioulsy hope to find more stories from you.

Far too long,could have been told in two chapters if all the repetitive and impossible sex scenes were removed.

This was a good read but Bob just ate about anything he could get his mouth to and this was a turn off

Yes there are spelling errors .. But guess what the story made up for it .. Keep up the good work .. This is One of My top Ten favorite stories

Really worthless story

First, Gail should have been the girl Bobby ended up with. After the last time he broke up with Natasha he should have given her the weekend, plus the Sunday and Thursday deal she had before she used to have, and then Wednesday, giving her the ultimatum that no more gangbang Wednesdays if they were gonna be an item. Giving Bobby to Becky made no sense given their limited history.

Second, there should have been better transitions between scenes/days/locations than there were, it was annoying and confusing at times.

Third, where was the variety in the women? You kept going out of your way to mention all the black guys that showed up at the gangbang. Yet there was no variety in the women. Sure Tash and her daughter, but they were so limited in time it wasn't worth mentioning.

Fourth, Bobby was a terrible main character. His decision making involving the women were dumb, even accounting for his age and lack of experience. There were numerous opportunities for him to lock up 1 solid girlfriend and he kept passing it off for pussy that had more problems than it was worth. Especially the Marge thing and most of his others work affairs.

Epilogue should have been it's own chapter.

I just lost hours of my life reading this series from start to finish, grabbing every opportunity I had to work another chapter.

Very high quality writing. Very hot! Though my dick would fall off if I was banging half the ladies Bobby was.

Thank you!

I knew there has to be an end somehow. But I always hoped there will be a happy ending with Natasha even after her stipd actions. Maybe a major impact like finding out that bobby fucked her mother and even his mother and a lot more woman than she ever knew would have an therapeutic impact. I even thought of some threeway relationship with Bobby, Natasha and Gail. At least I hoped for some bisexuality of Natasha, that never happened.

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Natasha got exactly what she deserves. Glad he married Becky. She was the only one who could deep throat!!! I'm not comfortable with a womans slutty past...

Yeah, I paid thru Amazon to read at my leisure. And I loved it enough to read twice. Saw a comment that there was no plot. Huh? Following Bobby thru just before his 18th birthday to his first year in college is the plot. Duh! Anyway JPB is on my favorite author list.

Nice story, but since Natasha wasn't the only one at fault, it deserved a better (requital) ending.

But that's my pov...

I didn't like the gangbangs nor that the author made us readers believe that many of the female characters were strongly bonded with the MC and that neither of them wanted to end their relationship and then, suddenly, they cut the bonds and the MC ends up with a minor character. I loved the first parts but the gangbangs and the epilogue killed the story, at least for me.

It's fiction but I think there are lots of incoherences. There are 18 parts and during 17 and 2/3 of those parts, the MC is a pig as he confesses: he is surrounded by women (several of which are married) who are willing to give him pussy, and during all those parts he confesses he can't renounce to those pussies. The women that surround him are all cheaters and as he confesses he is a man-slut, but suddenly, on the very last page, he turns into a faithful husband who renounces to all those pussies he wasn't willing to renounce in the previous pages. He evolves from a man-slut who takes part in gangbangs to a faithful husband in only one page!

I'll tell you what happens next: The MC cheats his wife with one of her secretaries. Is wife gets even doing some of his husband's friends and finally with their son, who makes his mother (the MC's wife) take part in gangbangs. The son does as well take all the pussy he can get because as his father (the MC) confesses and he ( the son ) will confess, have it in his genes...

How can he marry some slut like Becky.With her track record she is bound to cheat.?

This was a great story but I had to take one star off because it was 14 chapters too long.it was every 15 year olds fanciful, no one could do what this kid was supposed to do and live. Otherwise it was great

IMHO One of Bobs best stories. Lots of truth with the main one being a man is highly unlikely to turn down an offer of pussy. The sexual escapades are crazy in their scope but entertaining to consider. One thing I really liked about Bobby is that he recognized hypocrisy and tried to avoid it with some limited success. Most of us who have divorced cheating spouses demand the BTB format while failing to consider or acknowledge that they/we did the same thing them/our selves. Hypocrisy much......?

I hated this story and I gave it one star because it is the minimum you can give. It's one of those stories I wish I hadn't read.

I thought it was gonna be about a special guy that was so special that attracted lots of girls who would want to be only with him. But no, the girls were complete sluts who would fuck anybody. What's special about having a girl that anybody can have? I skipped lots and lots of passages because they turned me off completely. The gangbangs were especially repulsive.

This story might work beautifully for those readers who like stories about everybody fuc**ing everybody, but for those of us who value bonds and exclusive relationships, it doesn't work at all.

Of course, I haven't read any more stories by this author.

0 stars.

Loved it - I have never hung in there on a story of this length.

I wished you fleshed out the ending a bit, but overall, very well done.

Have read the whole thing... and I feel the need to wash my mind with soap and water. I can honestly say this is one of the most thoroughly disgusting runs through the sewer pit on this site. There is no morality, no social mores no anything other than people screwing anything with a cavity. The protagonist is an utter slime ball, which reflects the entire cast... This is an utter moral free zone here... The entire chain is nothing more than a bunch of sex scenes very loosely connected by some text,,, There is almost no characterization, no consistent thread of a metanarrative...and fact not much of a story here. This is pure and simply a stroke story, and frankly the sex scenes are so repetitive that even those seem to be cut and paste repetitive emotionless play acting.

The most salient feature of this long winded dialogue of debauchery is just how utterly boring emotionless assembly-line orgy sex gets in story after story. After 6 episodes of this nonsense it simply gets boring. Take that with the utter void of any real angst or character development whatsoever and you are left with a comic book,,,,with poster board cut outs instead of fleshed out characters with motives, emotions etc. You know it is really getting bad when the descriptions of the protagonists on job technical encounters are more interesting than the sex,.

Then there is the sheer mindless ping pong back and forth from one numbing encounter after another. Physical sexual gratification is nice....but there is no emotion, no romance, nothing. The whole crew in fact the entire story is noting but the same old orgy over and over and over again. In fact the "resolution" at the end in which the protagonist finally marries Beckiy is not a foreshadowed conclusion as much as the pinball hitting the last bumper and going home.... We really don't even know anything about Becky other than the protagonist just seems to have gotten tired of the whole thing and settled, at last, for the last whore standing to marry. This is not a happy ever after...its a ending of sheer empty exhaustion,

Still cannot believe I stuck through and read this whole benighted waste of space.... 1 star just because you cannot rate this lower.

The story series could be about half as much, the story is an great look at sex and how it how is important to our development

I didn't read it so much as skim it what was funny was the protagonists normalizing about Natasha when he was in fact the same if not worse? I mean seriously was she fucking her entire family extended family or in his case anybody's family? 1 out 10 and even that is generous

This is the saddest piece of crap. I had to stop half way thru the series, fast forward to the ending and find a paper bag to hurl in. I just need to know how can I rate it less then a 1?

Damn awesome novella. Reading it for the second time and liked it more. I am not sure if it’s just fiction or if most white girls/ women are gangbang sluts or BBC sluts. And like somebody said 2 in the same family

Epic! Great sex, hilarious premise, and just crazy enjoyable!

I mentioned on this site once before that annul is much more enjoyable with proper preparation; just an enema bottle, butt plug or dildo can make things so much easier, cleaner, and much less smelly. The preparation is a turn on in itself. My wife had some of her best orgasms holding an enema while I did her bent over or doggie before she said the safe word and I let go lol.

5 stars

I am not sure if this is pure fiction or if there is some truth to it. One thing I am guessing is true is the character Gail who went for the BBC gb instead of the date. I see that happening more and more these days…

Loved it. I can see work experiences and female teasing being based on some real life experiences as well college female infidelity. The rest, an excellent portrayal of horny male desires and fantasies (irrespective of age).

I loved it, but there should have been a bit more drama to it, especially with Bob and his mom and Mary. All that unprotected sex and no one got pregnant. In my experience at least half of the women would have been pregnant by the end of the story.

I was really rooting for Gail there. The Becky thing came out of nowhere, imo. Still, pretty entertaining.

What a novel. Thanks for your writing.

read parts 1, 2 and the last part. waste of time. sounds like a teenager's fantasy land

Rob is a hypocritical, lying, cheating, egocentric, self serving, incestuous, piece of shit, I only read to the end in the hope that he would get his just desserts, sadly not.

I fully realise that it’s fiction, but no human being could lead a sex life like his.

Hi Bob,

I really enjoyed your book after ch10 the sucking fucking etc were superficial. I'm an avid reader and your novel just got me in I had trouble putting it down. A good editor, a new catchy title and you have a best seller.

Cheers

Bob

I never thought I would say this, but there was just too much sex and all it was was repetition. Could have been 50% shorter and just as good.

The end was quite disappointing because there never seemed to be a spark between Rob and Becky and probably only happened because Bob wanted to end the story.

I'm also disappointed there wasn't even an attempt to bring Becky into the inner circle of the harem. Only his mom knew about everyone but his wife knew the least.

Second time I've read this epic Tome! Such a great read.

I didn’t think this thing would EVER end! Could’ve been half this size without the repetition.

I like your stuff, but goddam!