by Pars001
I have to say i'm sad to see this one come to a close but it was appropriate, i would say it was a well rounded story and you closed it off nicely.
I am an avid fan. I am following all three of your current stories with great enthusiasm. Please keep up the incredible work.
I really loved this story. like some i am sad to see it finished but. you did a great job on it. i will be following you for quite some time
The End came somewhat abrupt. Not intolerably so but still like there is something missing, some sort of final chapter perhaps or at least a few sentences before the epilogue to wrap up loose ends.
But otherwise the series was very interesting, not perfect but definitely great.
Thank you for sharing your talent at writting
All of this power being passed around, ancient gods being awakened and the only thing that happens is they make babies?? There has to be more than that! How do they interact with each other? With humans? Do they change the world?
I enjoyed this far more than I thought at the first chapter, thank you for sharing it.
Your writing was excellent, Your thinking process excellent. I would have paid for this book. I didn't think I would ike this at first and you "Changed my Mind". For that I thank you!
I like all of your stories, wish there was more to this series but I understand.
Please keep writing!
Could you please add more to the ending. I really love this story but couldn't tell if the man was in the human world of God world. I figured he'd get to be with Bast the rest of his life. Would love to heremore about the world's and the gods.
A well written little novel. And with an well planned ending. A rare thing in this forum. Thank you!
I enjoyed this story a lot. I have always enjoyed mythology and I really liked how the author instilled in the characters the qualities they showed. It was a wonderful read and I enjoyed it very much.
Damn, enjoyed every bit of this, shame it had to end
Thanks
Y'all telling me that a descendant of Zeus didn't yeet a lightning bolt or two?
Simply wonderful. I loved every minute reading it and read it straight through! Please keep writing and I’ll keep reading!! I loved it!!!
loved every chapter! you only left out the part where the Goddesses were forced to seduce me repeatedly to be fulfilled!
really great story and looking forward to your others!
Wait just a darned minute! What happened to Eris and Ares and the Goddess of War??? I want an ending to that part as well. Ppppllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssseeeeee??? I loved reading every word! Please keep writing and I’ll keep reading!!!