All Comments on 'A Wife Watching Fantasy, Too Far Ch. 02'

Plus the ability to have a coherent conversation in the throes of passion? Seriously? WTF? Either you have never had sex or you are an idiot. Either way, keep your retardedness to yourself, you're lowering the IQ of the site.

His fantasy is crap.

do the world a favor and kill yourself

you listed in your bio you have no fetishes i would hate to see a sick fuck like you with some, maybe if you went to school or read a book you would not be so fucking stupid.

hopefully she gets knocked up by a lover or catches aids that infects them both so they can rot away.

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Excellent chapter and story!!!

great to see a follow up, maybe its just the transition in the story, but this installment could have been knocked out in a few minutes, and it reads like it was, this isn't the quality read like your other efforts, the wife's emotional change turned to quick,also husband missing out on round two unusual for your stories,.....please return to form and finish this and the others in a timely manner!

That's a laughable statement. This writer doesn't have any standards. He writes for the fetish lovers, the sickos that get a hard on watching others ravish their wives. I guess, if that turns you on, have at it. As for me, I'm passing this guy up from now on. I don't find fetish erotic. Rating:0*

Did you ever notice how those who leave hateful comments seldom leave their names? As always extremely sexy.

The original ended in a good place! It left a lot of leeway in the reader's imagination for marital adjustment and development (both good and not so good!) This follow-up takes away the tension of how they MIGHT change and spells out a fairly extreme option that doesn't seem to bode well for them! Sometimes, less is more!

I found the after-poker sex recounting remarkably non-erotic. Bull's Sweetie did some more conniving, beyond her prior range and outside what I had pieced together as her concern level. She became an independent agent of ill will, which I believe the Chief Bull would NOT have tolerated! Also, Sweetie's accounting of the sex itself was fairly scanty AND ugly!

3*

I've loved all of Newbie's stories from the first one I can recall reading (the beach vacation story) but this chapter is ultimate hot writing. The dialogue between husband and wife having fantasy sex is superb. High Five for this one Newbie.

I cannot have enough of your stories! Keep them coming!

Btw, if you could send me the end of Latin wife, I'd much appreciate !

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Thanks

your stories, but this one is more weird than erotic

I enjoyed the story as a whole, especially part one. It just felt like you were building to a big finale of the wife getting corrupted by the bikers...which happened, but we didn't actually get to "see" it. Getting some details from the wife just wasn't enough. Now, as I said, I enjoyed the story as a whole and thought the set up was exceptionally good and erotic. It's just the ending left much to be desired. I am very much looking forward to the sequel though. I think you write very well and there's a lot of potential with these characters in this setting. Keep it up.

Great storyteller. You could be a great screenplay writer, if you could get a good director that could fully convey your stories into film.

Your timing is excellent ... you deliver suspense and anticipation so well. The method and style are even better than the content. As you stated, we fans can request your additional writings/chapters via email. Please send any and all additional writings to ... offbrat@yahoo.com thanks in advance

I really like your stories very much and even bought them online only to find that they were the sames stories incomplete. If you can not finish them and paying customers are not motivation enough for you to continue. Would you consider letting other writers adopt them and write additional chapters?

Thank you

Jim

Avcpuguy@gmail.com

loves taking it in the pooper while swallowing a sword, very weird... total sicko....

That was very erotic! Please send me the continuation of Janet's adventures.

Johnny1705@yahoo.com. Fantastic stories!

That was very erotic! Please send me the continuation of Janet's adventures to crew_dawg1@yahoo.com

Hi, - is there any chance you could send me the rest of the story?

Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It

UNO ESTRELLA

YOUR STORIES ALWAYS END UP WITH THE COUPLE TOGETHER STILL/ PEOPLE WITH WATCHING OR CUCKHOLDING FANTASIES NEED A CAUTIONARY EXAMPLE TOO. THERE ARE POST ONLINE OF MEN WITH CUCKHOLDING AND WATCHING FANTASY THAT THEIR WIVES LEAVE THEM BECAUSE THEY LOSE RESPECT FOR THEIR HUSBAND OR THEY NO LONGER FIND THEM SEXUALLY PLEASING. THERE ARE A LOT OF MARRIAGES BROKENED UP BECAUSE FANTASY BECOMES REALITY. NOT A HUGE POPULATION OF PEOPLE COULD HANDLE THIS LIFESTYLE. EVERYONE IS DIFFERENT AND MOST OR NEARLY THE HUMAN POPULATION CAN'T HANDLE THIS. A WOMAN COULD FALL IN LOVE WITH OTHER MEN WITH SEX AND INTIMACY. I FORGOT WHAT BIOLOGICAL RESPONSES IN WOMAN THAT CAUSES THE FEELINGS OF LOVE DURING SEX BUT IT LASSTS FOR HOURS IN WOMEN WHILE IN MEN LAST FOR ABOUT AN HOUR. THAT IS WHY PEOPLE WITH LOVE AFFAIRS LEAVE THEIR SPOUSES. WITH ONLY SEX AND ROMANCE INVOLVED AND WITHOUT THE STRESS OF MARRIAGE ITS EASIER TO FALL IN LOVE. YOUR SPOUSE NO LONGER DOES IT FOR YOU BECAUSE YOUR BRAIN TELLS YOU THEY ARE NO LONGER DESIRABLE. ITS JUST LIKE SOME WOMEN DON'T HAVE THE MATERNAL GENE AND HAVE TO WORK HARDER AND BE MORE CONCIOUS OF THEIR LACK OF MATERNAL INSTINCT. BUT MOST WOMEN DON'T HAVE THE SAME ISSUE. WOMEN WHO SHARE THEIR HUSBAND CUCKHOLDING FANTASY ARE RARE. ITS LIKE SOME PEOPLE GET SEXUAL HIGHS WITH WATER SPORTS WHILE A HUGE POPULATION OF PEOPLE DON'T. OR SOME WOMEN LIKE ANAL BUT LIKE 70 OR 80 PERCENT OF WOMEN THAT DON'T. YOUR STORIES STORIES ARE GOOD WITH PEOPLE WITH THAT KIND OF KINK. I HATE WHEN PEOPLE ON BOTH SIDES COMPLAIN. YOU HAVE TO FIND SOMEONE WITH YOUR COMPATIBLE NATURE. I KNOW A GUY WHO HAS A KINK OF A WOMAN BEATING HIM UP AND CHEATING ON HIM AND LEAVING. NOT A LOT OF WOMEN OUT THERE THAT FIT THAT BILL. I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE SAY THAT THEY HAVE SOME KIND OF HANG UP OF SOME SORT OR NOT ADVENTUROUS ENOUGH. IMAGINE YOUR SPOUSE LEAVING YOU BECAUSE SHE LOSES ALL RESPECT FOR YOU. IN YOUR STORY YOUR CHARACTER'S PARTNER ALWAYS FIND SOMEONE WITH THE SAME KINK OR ARE VERY COMPATIBLE. IMAGINE YOUR WIFE NO LONGER HAVING ORGASM WITH YOU BECAUSE SHE PREFERS DIFFERENT MEN. AND PEOPLE WHO COMPLAIN THAT IT IS SHIT BECAUSE THEY DON'T UNDERSTAND IT IS JUST THEIR MAKE-UP. OF COURSE YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND, BECAUSE YOU DON'T HAVE THE SAME KIND OF KINK. JUST LIKE A DOM WILL NEVER GET SATISFACTION BEING A SUB OR A SUB CAN NEVER BE A DOMINATE. SOME CAN GET OFF BEING BOTH. YOUR STORY TELLING IS GOOD WITH MORE HUMAN EMOTIONS INVOLVED. BUT IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU WENT OUTSIDE THE BOX AND HAVE A GUY WITH A WATCHING KINK WHILE THE WIFE DOESN'T AND SHE LOSES ALL RESPECT AND TRUST IN HER HUSBAND AND HE GETS SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED WITH HER HE BECOMES DEPRESSED.

love all your stories. can you send me conclusion to Janet's story? nlacxo@gmail.com

There are a few inconsistencies in this story, like how did her panties get so full of cum if the first thing she did was let let the guy take them off her. If the sex occurred elsewhere, and she put her panties back on to return to her room, this wasn't made clear. Still i like your writing, just a shame you don't finish most of the stories you write. A fault a lot of authors on this site share.

It seems you don't write anymore but if you do again please finish these stories. It would also be interesting to have them written from the women's perspective. What were they thinking because it seems that at some level they were pushing their husband's so they could play while making him believe it was being done because he was pushing the issue.

Absolutely Incredible

Is there more? CarnalProdigy@gmail.com

can you send me conclusion to Janet's story? champs472@gmail.com.

there is much more ground to cover here; develop the relationship with janet & marie & scott & marie. to say nothing of another interlude between janet & huggs.

then, their returning to home life. did she get pregnant & by whom? did just janet enjoy her sexual awakening & was scott reduced to an observer or was he allowed to be an active participant?

Please send continuation of the story to crich1992@yahoo.com

A great story real hot hot. Can're wait for the next one...ca97

hi newbie 2008,

great story(ies) indeed.

About this last part, I/we would've loved to hear Janet explain how it all started when she went back to the hotel with Marie, but without the men ... where do the 3 guys came from? how did the action started? She mentions having had great orgasms with them ... we want to know!! Also, she mentionned glass doors ... did she do it in the open, for everyone to see? And, hubby replied that he only saw the second part ... so there is ground for him to get Janet to explain the first part!!!

Anyway, thanks again for your stories ... keep up the goor writing :-)

Loved part one and part two,just need part 3 now !!!!,my wife is dead against sharing but if it was going to happen it would be along the lines you describe,so erotic when other men cum inside your wife and you can see her gaping and cum leaking out (not that I've experienced it) Great stories please keep them up on the mature wife/reluctance theme,I love it ,well done

And, why have you stopped posting?

There are a whole lot more than just a few awful submissions on this site!

There a huge group of authors with unrealized talents that could hone their craft if they’d reach out for help!

There are some very talented authors on this site and you are/were one of them, but for reasons unknown you seem to have let life guide you in other directions!

So if there's more, please let me know where to find you and/or them!

Sincerely, Rik

PS: I copied this note & added an email address via your bio page!

Wife lived her desires and her husband's wishes for his pretty woman to fuck other men got him what he wanted. Except it was more than he wished for.

When will you do the sequel?

Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It

I think it's strange to see all of these readers who have sent anger and hatred to the comments section of this author's story. The "Loving Wives" category is filled with relationships that involve others. All these hate-spewing trolls should just stick with a category that works for them. I don't remember seeing an anger management category though. Nobody wants to see your disgusted comments. That being said, I didn't appreciate this second story as much as the first. I felt like it was incomplete, where you left out pretty much what this whole set of stories was totally about. The husband wanted to see his wife with other dudes, and she wanted to do it. And when it supposedly happened, all we get is some paltry explanation that left me frustrated and short-changed. This was not nearly as erotic as your first story. And...thank you for your effort and creativity.

I greatly enjoyed the story . Part one was awesome and part would have been alittle better if the group sex and the husband missing out was done differently. If you could send me the rest of the story, Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It I would appreciate it. Hrealq@aol.com

More sick,cuck,bullshit on cuckorotica!

CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!

This is a very good story. Send me the rest of the story at mrjohnadams444@gmail.com.

Your story was really great and I'd love to read more please send further details at saudshkh08@gmail.com

As usual a great storie, can you send me the rest at gepalomo@yahoo.com

Thanks

If this guy is supposed to be an extension of yourself, you've got problems. That, or you left out the part where Scott immediately runs upstairs and beats the ever living fuck out of Marie, followed by his marriage rapidly spiraling down the toilet, and the PTSD his wife is going to have as a result of "voluntarily" going along with the gangbang that destroyed her once-happy marriage. Just imagine the yeeeeears of regret that will follow from that. Her inability to have a normal sexual relationship ever again. How that will translate into her provably never having the family she was hoping to start on this vacation. Bravo.

You create all these supposedly intelligent and strong willed characters and then have them turn into powerless, automatons, EASILY seduced by, apparently, GALLONS of semen anywhere in the vicinity of a uterus. It's like kryptonite.

I'll give you this much, you're trying to get at the conflicting emotions involved in such a toxic fetish, and I think you could have done a good job of it if you weren't already so far down the rabbit hole that you've lost perspective. Some of the sexual tension you create (earlier in your stories) is quite good, but you push situations too far. To the point where casual readers just end up disgusted and pissed off. The supposedly normal characters you start out with spend a good deal of time reaching and crossing the initial "naughty" line, and then immediately devolve into unsympathetic idiots who ultimately deserve every shitty consequence that naturally flow from their retarded decisions.

I'm honestly surprised that you haven't gotten into "oops! My wife's pregnant and the dna test says it isn't mine! I'M SO TURNED ON!" thing yet. It's pretty obvious that's where you want to go. Just so you know . . . that's not normal.

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Please send more to mypawnaddiction@gmail.com

Cheers

I realised after she had tasted another cock (a big one) she followed with a mind blowing orgasm in CH1 she would want more cock, and her wimp of a husband just wanted to watch so she sets out to please his fetish. Question is she still trying to pregnant or did she go back on the pill or rely on the morning after pill.

I still don't get a husband wanting his wife be fucked by others his pea sized brain is definitely situated in his cock end,

Got to be more than this ending!!. I loved this entire story, great job of describing the intimate details of their feelings. Very well don, looking forward for further writings.

Don't listen to the comments from the jealous men, the women are raving over this story and can't wait to read the rest of your collection! Writing skills are awesome!

I can't find Volume II? Where can it be found, or, isn't it written yet?

Where is volume 2

Wish you would finish this vol 2 I would like to see what happens. Hog riders are a rare breed but I’ve known quite a few that served with me and we still talk about some of their adventures.keep writing peace

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Now it's just pathetic! He wasn't there to watch. And she was too tired to be with her husband but not to tired for a gangbang behind his back. Hubby is a complete loser.

Please continue this story line, it’s fantastic.

liars and cheats - one and all.

Same as how Rome was lost

The interaction and the fucking - with a filled pussy! What will happen in nine months?

A little rushed with not enough of the wife side of the story. Not your best work

With her pregnancy issues behind her how does she let the new found Janet revert to a homebody and there is no way hubby will let that happen.

1 * because once more you have promised more and failed to deliver nothing worse than an unfinished tale. Stupid thing is, the story could have been wound up without much effort.

Please continue this story. It’s too good to end now!

1*, nothing more needs to be said

I (mostly) liked "Three Days" (although it had some major issues), and that's why I read "Wife Watching." It was actually not so bad until they got to the sex. It was so non-erotic that I struggled to get through it. It woulda been more entertaining had it simply been about suburban poseurs pretending to be "motorcycle people."

The author's ongoing obsession with semen and sperm cells is just bizarre. You might think we'd have gotten some voyeuristic images of Janet "losing control" near the end (not that it's at all clear why she'd be doing that), but we mostly got graphics descriptions of ... semen. Just why? And, dear fucking god, stop using the word "nuts." Was it your intention to turn people OFF?

Plus, the editing was just atrocious. There are small spelling and punctuation errors EVERYWHERE. And, Jesus, the verb forms ... please learn the difference between "ridden" and "rode." Fuck, really?

This husband is the worlds dumbest stupid idiotic M/F'n ass hole.. to continually abandon his wife.. every time he does, something really horrible happens.. then this dumb shit husband tells lie after lie to his wife to cover his ass.. just stay with your wife which is what she wants and then this crap won't happen...and wife keeps on fuckin even if he's not there-- why does this author keep bringing drama into this failing marriage? barely one star

Your story has a very good plot. I really enjoyed reading it. It does need to be finished though. Does Janet get pregnant and if so who is the biological father? Do they continue on their journey and will Janet allow Scott to watch. Can Scott still please her with his average sized cock or does she need multiple guys with large cocks? To me these and other questions about their relationship need to be answered. Thanks a very good read and please continue.

I don't understand all the negative comments. If you think the lifestyle is so terrible, LEAVE. I personally think most of the guys that leave the negative comments are thinking about their wife fucking other guys while jacking off. But after they pop their loads they have remorse and become angry with themselves and thus the comments. It is a known fact that the 2nd most searches on porn sites is cuckold.

Good storyline, but there's a lot of unknowns and it needs to be finished.

My wife and I went to my company party drinking dancing visiting just really having fun. I was beginning to feel the alcohol hitting me and I was sitting out on several dances but some coworkers were keeping my wife on the floor. She was agravated at me and let me know it I couldn't blame her. Finally she said want to go to bed all employees had rooms I said I was sorry but yes. In bed I was done for but I could tell she wasn't undressed I asked why? She said I'm naked you dummy but I knew better. I was out. I heard the door click shut she was gone. I was sobering up pretty quick yanked on cloths but couldn't find her. Just as I gave up and headed back to the room I seen her with some coworkers male and female. I went to the front desk saying I lost my key card with proof I got 2 new cards. Two and a half hrs later there was a knock at the door. I figured it was her I acted like I was still drunk and horny she was saying she needed the restroom I went to bed. I tried to play with her but she pushed me away saying she was tired. After a while when I was sure she was asleep I got up and found her panties were a mess. I was pissed and was going to scare her straight or divorce her. I beat 2 loads into to the already messy panties laid them so when she rolled over she would put her face in the mess. I laid back down gently waited a while and started coughing acting like I couldn't get my breath. She rolled over right into the panties she yelled what the heck. I turned on the light she looked a mess. I asked what the H___ are you doing? What the where have you been what is this? She said I'm in trouble. I jumped right in saying do you really care? I'm so sorry but that doesn't fix it. You got that right I'm going home do what you want because you already did what you wanted anyway didn't you. I sorry there is no excuse for what I done. Then she asked don't you have that breakfast meeting? Yes but I am the laughing stock of the company now so I will probably quit and look elsewhere for a job. I started packing. She started packing also and I asked don't you want to stay and be with your lovers? They are not my lover's. Couldn't prove it by your actions while I was here by myself could you. No. Please stay I would like to be with my husband at that meeting in the morning to prove I am with you and you only. I think I'm about to do one of the stupidest things I have ever done in my life If you tell me every person involved in this mess. She name them all. At the meeting I aproched each one by themselves and said if they stayed for the meeting I would name them in a report with HR first thing Monday morning. Two remained and I got up to aproche the HR director I walked by them bent down and wispered I was going over to Joe the HR man right now. As I turned at the end of the table toward him I looked back and they were both gone so I went on past him and down the hall. After a short stay I went back to my wife. At the end of the meeting we were presented with our annual bonuses. They were expected to be pretty good this year. You had to be present to receive them unless you were excused before the event. I had to laugh. My wife looked at me and said you done that didn't you? I said yes that made it probably the most expensive piece they ever had. Pretty cool don't you think? She just shook her head in disbelief. Yes and the bonus was very good and they said we would get the remainder next week. My wife asked you really get another check? What for? Well the employees that weren't here that is split between the employees that were here plus they aren't eligible for a raise at the next reevaluation. Pretty cool huh? Later at home she asked if I was up to going to bed early and having some fun? I said I really don't think that would be a good idea. Why not? I'm still pretty upset with what you allowed yourself to do to me plus don't you think you should make sure you aren't infected with something one or more of them may have infected with some kind of a VD. OMG I'm sorry I will go now. I said wait a minute just call find out how soon you can be tested how long for things to show up and when we can have safe sex again for you and me. Why you? Well we had sex the night before last and I want to be sure. She said I never had sex with anyone other than you till last night I'm sorry. That is the last time I want to hear that on this situation understand? Yes she called and it was a while before we could be tested but we done it per their suggestions. It was kind of awkward at work but thing's got better at home and at work. At work the two that didn't want to leave the meeting smarted of once threatening to kick my butt. I said have at it if you want HR to know. Plus you could get some different packages at home that the wives may not like and your own butt kicked. My wife and I worked thing's out and we are both happy.

More LW shit! Who does this sort of thing? Nobody I’ve ever known or heard of. I am guessing that’s because I don’t associate with degenerates. If this makes you happy, knock yourselves out!

Anything goes in a fantasy. But in real life, this was stupid on every level and so are the guys who think it could ever be real.

Outstanding

I think that the plot was good, and the post-event conversation interesting, the graphics of the sex ordinary, but worst of all the husband irritating...a typical lawyer for his abject dishonesty towards a wife who was endearing in her willingness to go along for the ride--excuse the pun--and enjoy it, as some of us know when a woman is moved to pick the forbidden fruit from the vine.

Close to reality

Watching wife fuck means he is a cuck.

Great fantasy. Wife kind of runs hot and cold with her desires, but it was a fun ride. Not a fan of lawyers, though, so I hope she “retains” her boy toys at her leisure.

Ok, but disappointing in many ways. JEF

We got to see the author embracing his homosexuality side in chapter 1.

In chap 2 we got the feeling that this time the author self insertion was to the wife.

Nice fantasy.

He should probably write in the gay section next time since it seems his imagination are capable to do that greatly.

Also he can spare the cringed moment of straight male like me that reading gayish protagonist without warning, and make gay readers happy instead.

Thanks for sharing the story.

5/5 for me since the story quite alright,

my grammar is sucks and I ain't grammar nazi for obvious reason.

Excellent story , really perverse and cool characters (not man too aggresive) , you are one of the best writers on this site . (In my top 3) . I really enjoy it a lot , THANK YOU !

Outstanding!! A longer version of 'Wife's Usual First time. Loved that one and now this one too.

Good story ark. Good dialogue. Believable characters... I truly want to read more about these two. The promise of a continued ' Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It' is inticing.

EXCELLENT Story!! 5 Stars! I can't wait until next part.

Sorry, swimming in other guys’ semen is not a turn-on for me. Janet having sex with other guys might have had potential, but……. You might have held my perverted interest with lesbianism.

Good story, but I was disappointed that Scott didn’t have a full round with Marie.

Earle

Loved it. A touch of Lesbian action would have been icing on the cake. I hope you continue writing, and thankyou for your current portfolio. Cheers.

This is a very well written series. There are a few typos that should be addressed. Is it possible to go in and fix them? I would have enjoyed a more gradual decline of the wife but still, it was really good.

It’s an interesting premise that’s been created here. And yes, it’d be great to see a continuation of this. However since this story is from November of 2012, I’m pretty certain that unfortunately we’ll not be reading anymore about this couple and their experimentations into the world of a hot-wife fucking other men for her husband’s sexual entertainment 😐

Read the writer's profile. I think he went commercial with his work. Heck, eight stories and 4400+ fans? In his comments: ***I had a guy see if my writing was worth anything, anything at all. If looking for more of 3 Days Watching My Wife, try out adultebookshopDOTcom, authour search Nathan Pike. It's very inexpensive, less than $3.***

I just wish you would post Volume II on here.

Ugh. Good until the end. So much lying and deceit and addiction and stupidity. Went totally wrong when it could have been great. Yuck

Great story where the fuck is volume two

Not a bad story. But, at the end where she just babbled on and probably knew that hubby hadn’t set up the three guy bang. Just because he started the fantasy she wanted to go deeper with it. The way I read this is he got played.

Bummer, after 12 years it's unlikely that volume 2 will be seen.

Kinda went off the rails, there.

newbie2008, where are you? you have been gone a long time and we need more stories!