All Comments on 'A Wife's Time'

by GettingItDone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved it

I'd love to see more. It's always interesting to see where different writers take a black owned white wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

Would love to read more and continue with this story

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sick 1*

no more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow, wow, wow!!

Great story! As the adage goes, once blacked there's NO turning back. I could almost feel and smell that wonderful black cock myself. Well written story and I hope there will be more to it. AND she called him Daddy! Her poor husband lost his wife.

LustyScribeLustyScribeover 4 years ago
Great start!

I look forward to seeing just how far "Daddy" takes her. Keep it up!

bobbphil08bobbphil08over 4 years ago

Great story, looking forward to (hopefully) more chapters!

DunkirkDunkirkover 4 years ago

He needs to give his slut a present

A baby bump would be In order

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

continue please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Boring

Just tedious fantasy stereotypes....

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Baby Bump

I agree that she will be told that she will be marking her ovulation schedule on a calendar so that he can plan to impregnate her. Lots of adventures as that path of the story unfolds.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 4 years ago

Absolutely shite!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
1st time bad story

this is 1st time I did not liked your story.

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 4 years ago

Good first chapter, but you've left the door wide open for more to follow. Hubby's reaction to her being black owned for example, and ultimately breeding her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A Good Idea

You should have her have sex with some of his friends at a sports game house party or with a sports after game gagbang or something like that and have her get a tattoo or be branded so everyone knowing she is he's. I put sports because I do not know what sport you like or going to use on the next letter if you like my ide so I just put sport to cover it all

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

Sooner rather than later!

karl4sexkarl4sexover 4 years ago
Great

A great hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good story

Would like to see more of this story continue

GettingItDoneGettingItDoneover 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you all that enjoyed this story. I do have ideas bouncing around for the continuation of it, but may focus in some other stories first. This is by far been the most comments I have gotten in such a short amount of time; it's insane.

For those, you disliked it, I'm sorry and hope you find something else on here that tickles your fancy. There is something for everyone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
yes! more, please!

great story of the submission of a white wife to a dominant Black Man. there needs to be more of her being owned by Him and fulfilling all of His directions to ensure not only His pleasure and enjoyment, but also of His friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
nope

Once is bad enough; unless you'll have the husband develope some balls and kill the bitch and her asshole owner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
husbands delema

Great story so far. How does the husband get satisfied sexually now, if ever?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Humiliating the strong, dominant whit

The white bitch wears the black collar around her neck and ignores husband chained to chair with cage over his straining cock as he doesn't want to pee over the cage. Doorbell rings and she opens door to welcome a black dominatrix who is the black man's girlfriend. She slaps her on the face and orders her to strip naked to receive the much needed discipline. She is made to remove the cage from her husband's straining cock and suck off the piss to fill up her belly without dropping any of it on the floor. She is made to sate both her Master and Dominatrix.

echo899echo899over 4 years ago
Go further

Nice. Would love to see this go on.

alexetlaurealexetlaureover 4 years ago

Great story needing more chapters, black owned and shared with other brothers making a whore of her.

Thank you for writing such stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story!

Thanks Gettingitdone!

This story has the potential to become a great series, with other episodes featuring (for example) a threesome involving the master, the wife and another of his sluts, public humiliation, and the master taking the wife in front of the husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
LOVED THIS STORY

Don't care about the details about thr husband spend it all on the wife....cant wait to read the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thought it was great

I enjoyed it thoroughly and can't wait for more.

JanesHusbandMarvJanesHusbandMarvover 4 years ago
Holy Thesaurus, Batman

I truly enjoy a woman's point of view on cuckold stories. But, WOW, so many and varied ways of expressing the same few things. Not repetitive I'll grant you. And so so many clichés. The first part caught my interest for the most part (although, laundry naked? Seriously?). But once she was out of the house it really tapered off. Well written, but not all that imaginative. The whole ownership and BBC and daddy really detracted from what otherwise could have been a fun tale. I almost gave up, thankful it didn't go to a page three. I am interested to read more of what else this author has written, though. I mean, there is some really good potential here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This was one of the best stories ever. I hope you continue the story

I hope to read mor of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More?

I am not a fan of stories where the man always is the sub. So I give this a 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

Please make more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Definitely a great start

A great start to a story i would love to read more plus i do think the master could find more use for the hubby in the picture maybe just for humiliation are other uses not really sexual but still made in the nude!

Anthony1965Anthony1965about 4 years ago
More

Please write more to this story. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Looking for more !!!!!!!!!

i love ownership and would love another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue

This story need more chapters. Not started out great

OOAAOOAAalmost 4 years ago
SUPER HOT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!

Well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
kinda lame

Who in their right mind would meet a stranger for sex and then agree to be taped, then enslaved to a person they never met before?

Too stupid to live, i guess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More!

More, please!

bdiver76bdiver76over 3 years ago

This is a great story, keep adding more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot slut

Looking forward to many more adventures of the owned slut being used and shared by her new master

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I would kick her out she could do ant thing she wants but not as my wife .........................................................

algolfcrazyalgolfcrazyalmost 3 years ago

Love this story.Made me wish it was my wife being owned by bbc.I had a hard on the whole story

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 2 years ago

I'm not sure if I'm in the minority or not, but why does every white, married woman, cheating on her husband allow herself to be called a slut? And why do these black men insist on owning these stupid fucking women? For these reasons, I think the 1* was MORE than generous.

Bardot1990Bardot1990over 2 years ago

I agree with Justplainjeff. Cheating is one thing. Allowing oneself to be denigrated as a slut is quite another. Especially in the setting of an IR relationship, why are the women always called sluts? Doesn't that smack of an unspoken racism?

Buster2UBuster2Uover 2 years ago

I didn't really care for the volunteery slave business, but I liked the wife having to be nude for master. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

One that targets some lower life form and deviant loser. So stupid and pathetic one can only wonder what emotional or psychological issues these sick and twisted fans of this story have. Awful just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dumber than a stump. Of course they will be getting a divorce. Who would touch the slut with a ten foot pole?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Was my wife that stupid to think that I would tolerate being cheated on and her so called master control both of us? Wrong. I was so glad that her rich father had insisted on a prenuptial agreement not wanting his perfect daughter to be taken advantage of by a poor boy that had built his own business. The agreement was that if either cheated the cheater left with just personal belongings. After the divorce was granted her father came to me and actually apologized for the behavior of his daughter and asked if they would be allowed visitations with the grandchildren. I said sure as long as the children wasn't ever around his daughters master. Master he said that piece of shit had better never be around any of the including his daughter. I also informed him that the money that they had given their daughter would be put in a trust for the children that I never wanted his money I married her for love and I guess she didn't love me. He said that was wrong and hopefully that the therapist would help her back to what she used to be. I said I did too. We were remarried and again with a prenuptial agreement. That was years ago and we now have grandchildren. By the way the master can't even mastetbait anymore. Something happened to him. Lol.I always wondered if my father-in-law had anything to do with it but never asked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good one. Would love to be her husband and allowed to watch and clean them after every date.

Freudzslip69Freudzslip69about 1 year ago

BOOOORING! How many times can one say the same things, over, and over, and over, and over again; ad nauseum? Next time why don’t you try doing a plot rather than the repetitious sex scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow absolutely fantastic!

piecesbbcloverpiecesbbclover10 months ago

Wonderful story, one of the better ones actually. Especially loved the part of the wife wearing the key and it being controlled by her owner.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well, hopefully her husband will finally get some balls and file for divorce. Maybe he will get some of his military friends to pay the master a little visit?

Writer4Writer48 months ago

A great story, but would you consider one where the wife leaves for two, three weeks, where her black owner changes her. Body bleaching or darkening, implants, her Achilles tendon shrunk, marked and pierced, her personality totally changed.

guysenseiguysensei8 months ago

Dominant woman turned submissive? Extremely hot. I hope she’s still dominant with her husband and just submissive to her new owner.

Also her descriptions and the overall way she transformed into being an owned property was super hot aswell

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love the submission to the cock and all the lust she's going through in expectation of more erotic fucking

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Yes if Debbie my wife went on a date with another I sure as Hell wouldn't own her. I'd be gone.

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