All Comments on 'A Winter's Tale'

though the writing is a bit wooden in places. The use of contractions would help it flow more naturally.

Everything about your story had good points, except for the cold-bloodedly selfish way the landlady treats Jacob the new tenant.

It's for funsies for both parties, I guess, but my pet peeve is sex creates an emotional as well as physical response. She uses the guy like a dildo for her pleasure then leaves when she's done with him. It transforms their relationship and she doesn't give a tinker's fart about that.

I object to lovers being used as objects, really. It doesn't always have to be true love when folks decide to fuck, but a little mutual consideration goes a long way to make it better for both.

Your story's well-written, I just object to the utilitarian tone on the piece.

This is a very nice story.... I bet you are a real handful in bed!! I'm sure Jacob is celebrating the day he saw the ad for your place and not feeling at al mistreated. A good story and nice writing. Keep up the fine work!

Paul

Typical of a woman - gave little pleasure or warmth back

Is there a smile emoticon available here?

Two Nice People...sharing warmth...with mutual encouragement!

What's to hate?

Much to Love!

I'll be what she's having! :+))

*****HOT azz flash story!! Damn that was a really entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.